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Umm, loved the chapter. No, really I did. *blinks* See??
Shit, Charlie's being released?!
*giggles* Puppy Coitus Interruptus... *shakes head* sorry, couldn't resist.

Oh gods... tit or teeting? *snickers* Ohhh, I see massive amounts of fun ahead!

“How did you make out?” Robbie asked.
Umi pointed to Seto. “We can’t.”

*giggles* Love it!

“I want a tit!” Aten screamed excitedly.
Jay and Karl bheirheir lips and used the doorway to stay on their feet.
“We can’t help you with that, Aten. How about a treat instead?”
“I want a teet!”
Seto turned red and used the iron railing to hold himself on his feet.
Jay put two pieces of sugar-free candy each. “There’s your treats, boys.”
“Thants for the teets, Gay!”

*falls over howling* Oh Gods, oh Gods, oh Gods... *wipes eyes*

Oh my... Poor Robbie and Aten. Okay, question: will his flashbacks ever become easier for him to come out of?

Oy... breaking someone in half... Damn, I gotta go out to breakfast now?!

Aria grinned. “Who’s my daddy?”
Bakura lifted up his daughter. “Who’s got daddy’s murderous tendencies? Who’s got daddy’s bloodlust?”
Aria’s hair spiked and her canines were revealed behind her grin. “Me. I AM CHIBI BAKURA!”

Okay, never thought I'd say this: That's just a too cute father and daughter scene! *grins*

Robbie in the Shadow Realm?? Okay, teaser for the next story yes? *smirks*

Awwwww, what a sweet and peaceful end. *g*

umm just to let you know thanks again for the lemon your giving me and also the birthstone for october is a emerald, saphire is for september. I'm pretty sure the kids were born on halloween weren't they?

*blushes and smiles* Glad ya like that kind of cake and I still have half hte cake left. A bra hanging off Battle Ox's horn? *ROFL* Oh can you blame Aira? Heh well I jsut hope she doesn't decide to show Umi her bra jsut yet. The presents they got were more than adorable and seriously, maybe Ryou should have gotten Duke something lacey. Seriously he acts so--girly (not in a bad way mind you). Well Yami has finally stopped pestering yugi, ne? Good! ... I think. Well sorry this is short but I gotta jet. Happy Birthday kiddies and don't get sick eating birthday cake. Oh yeah, I totally like Gabby she's a sweety!! *big grin*

what can i say except happy birthday ryou!!! *giggles* want some cake? i baked a classic yellow cwithwith dark chocolate frosting of two laye^ an^ and the gifts he got, so beautiful!! Miranda is a major sweetheart. No more kids? Oh well... but Robbie has Aten and Aria and everyone else. Poor Pinchy... goddess save that scorpion. 4 more chapters? *sqeuals* I can't wait!! Halloween is my ultimate fav time of year though!! sometimes i wish i was born on Octinstinstead of a month early. Oh well, loved the movie and the new cards ryou got. those cosmo cards rock!! Laterz!! *hugs and kisses ur way*

wow I was wondering how Bakura would le Yle Yami's rape. I can't wait to see what you do for the kids when they hit puberty. I really wish that somehow Aten could do better in school. Like maybe by some miricle and really hard work he becomes the top of his class. That would be nice. I had a similiar situation, I was labelled ADD and therefore put in basically the stupid classes then Iked ked my butt off the prove to teachers that I was just as smart as anyone else, just htlyhtly distracted a bit more. I ended up graduating in the top 1/3 of my s. s. 60th in a class of 196. Anyway so I am proof that just because the school thinks your dumb doesn't mean you can really really prove them wrong. I also have a small request, could you write a lemon for my birthday. I have never asked for a lemon but this year I'd like to have one, irthirthday is on the 4th of september, if your to busy I understand as I am fixing to get very busy with school starting on Monday and this will be the first time I will not be able to goe foe for my birthday. for its the first weekend of college. I'm turning 22 and i know that I should be considered to old to go home for my b-day but at the same time I know i will kinda of miss it. Anyway, great job can't wait to see you finish it, oh one more thing, for your halloween episode you should have aria wear lots and lots and lots of pink, I hate pink but i think it'll be enough to give her daddy's a heartattack. LOL. Well laters

wow I was wondering how Bakura would handle Yami's rape. I can't wait to see what you do for the kids when they hit puberty. I really wish that somehow Aten could do better in school. Like maybe by some miricle and really hard work he becomes the top of his class. That would be nice. I had a similiar situation, I was labelled ADD and therefore put in basically the stupid classes then I worked my butt off the prove to teachers that I was just as smart as anyone else, just slightly distracted a bit more. I ended up graduating in the top 1/3 of my class. 60th in a class of 196. Anyway so I am proof that just because the school thinks your dumb doesn't mean you can really really prove them wrong. I also have a small request, could you write a lemon for my birthday. I have never asked for a lemon but this year I'd like to have one, My birthday is on the 4th of september, if your to busy I understand as I am fixing to get very busy with school starting on Monday and this will be the first time I will not be able to go home for my birthday. for its the firstkendkend of college. I'm turning 22 and i know that I should be considered to old to go home for my b-day but at the same time I know i will kinda of miss it. Anyway, great job can't wait to see you finish it, oh one more thing, for your halloween episode you should have aria wear lots and lots and lots of pink, I hate pink but i think it'll be enough to give her daddy's a heartattack. LOL. Well laters

This might post twice so i apologize for that my lemon I'm requesting I would like to be between Seto and Joey.

Again, awesum chappie! Thank u 4 the plushie ^.^ I'm happy u'r doing a story with their past ^_^ yay! Aw...a halloween chappie...That'll b so cute...Well, do keep up the great work! Lookingwardward 2 next chappie! l8tr.

I absolutely love this story ^_^ I love all your fics^^ u have a very unique style of writing, that makes my day. I look forward to each chappie. I loved this chappie- and am looking forward to the sequel ^^ . I love Aten - so adorable. I was just wondering, you've done a fic about Seto and Joey's past , and one about Ryou and Bakura's. Are you planning on ever doing one about Malik and Marik's past? I love how you write Malik and Marik's characters- and would think you'd do a wonderful - no excellent job on a fic about their past. Think about it ^^ well, l8tr. I am looking forward to tomorrow ^^

hehe...not tomorrow- sunday... I'm sleep deprived. gomen. well then- looking forward to sunday. l8tr daiz! keep up the good work ^.~

ROFL oh man Heaven and Hell didn't want her!!! No wonder she's still kicking!!! You know, I do feel bad for the scorpion ^^ Kinda reminds me of the crab. Ooh I bet he's happy. ^^ Yami... well you know, that explains why he's such a ass. Period. Too bad they jsut can't destroy that door or something like that. Anyway, coodles for Yugi for not giving in and um, please make sure Anshar doesn't burn the Flame Swordsman plushie? ^^; I can really picture him and he kinda makes me nervous but hey, Joey and Seto trust him. Also, well sad to see this end but so glad you'll be doing a sequel soon. From waht you told us it will be a bigger blast to read and I bet write as well. I don't look forward to all the bad stuff but hey, that's why we keep coming back!! I can wait to see the tortue you inflict on the villians though. Oh yeah, one final question, will Miranda ever have another child? I have nothing agasint Robbie I think he is a very sweet child as are Aten and Aria and Mako and Hayden. Oh yeah that reminds me *giggles* TIME TO SQUISH THE CHIBIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!