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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person LIttleUke Io
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! ^-^ Can't wait for the next chapter!
person Liann
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!! YUGI!!!!! *saves yugi* whats happening to yugi?????????
me feel so bad for marik an kura...no not yami. he can die a slow painful death. peeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeesh kura no die!!!!!!!!!!!! *runs away with bakura* XD
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesomeness!! I really liked this chapter!
Aria uch uch an awesome little lady, obviously the result of good genetics;-)
I feel bad for Jamien! I can't wait to see how Seto handles the situation. I also
wonder how Hayden will take the news....hmm....
As for Yugi....did he somehow get the Yami virus too, or is living with the meany former
pharaoh just aging him faster than normal?

person Xenobia
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Jaimen! I hope the gods are kinder to him now that his bitch mother is gone...
*wipes tears from eyes*
Auntie Xeno will help take care of you...please let him be a good guy in spite of the assholes who took him.
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ding Dong the bitch is dead!! *sings and dances* I take it Alex and Donnu will never look at Aria the same way but she's so cute when she goes into yami mode. OOh!! Chibi Yami Seto!! *giggles* Hell Seto shouldn't broken her neck but he stood up to her and that's what really counted. And the boy, oh man... I can tell this is gonna be trouble. It wasn't his fault it's not like he asked to be born. Jumping ahead 4 months sounds good ot me. But I gotta jet, I have class in half an hour. Bye!!
person star
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
adding too my other rreview ps. I wish they would haavve striped him and tied him to a light pole or something he would desrve it . after what he did to backura .it almost seemed that bakura ccoouuld be meean anoough to him . like i said the oly thing with reveange is it will not end because nnnow yamii might want to have thier heeads . and ii thinkkk yugi need to see it and leearn tthat yami isn;t all he pretendss to be .
person Lady Elfskye
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! That was an awesome chappie!!! Totally coolies!! GO ARIA!!! Damn, I do feel sorry for Jamien though. Poor kid. The question is, not if *Seto* will accept him or not, but how will Aria and Aten react?? Expesally Aria. Not to mention Mokuba, Joey, and Hayden. We all know how Hayden was welcomed by the chibis. And how will he react when he finds out that it was *Seto* indirectly, Aria directly, that killed his mother??? Wow!! Talk about emotional stress!!!

And WTF is happening to Yugi?????????????????????????????????????


Lady Elfskye
person star
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey thanks for responding pag page is cool . and I love this chap alot of action . bakura should of stripped yami and throoough him out side it lookk like he wass holdiing bakk alittlleee or it just me maybe . Yami did get what he deserveees though and know yugi knows what a liar he is. Bakura and mairk might be theivees but theres no reason to . The only thing about revinge though is when he ggets better he coould orr might go aftter them one at time . hyaqmi dosn;;;t sseem like the tyype to let that go.
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much!! *grins and drags Yami into a dark room* No reason Yugi should see this. Man blood lust does soem crazy stuff to them but Yugi knows the truth. Aten is home and Aria is safe and I'm really glad about that. Seto's gonna confront that whore? Can i beat her to a bloody pulp afterwards? okay i'm off to have my fun ^^ *closes down and soon, wet snapping noises of bones are heard as well as soemtimes wet popping* Take this you sadistic bastard!! and this and that! and some more of this! (i love baseball)
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Super-great job!
Thank you for that absolutely awesome lemon, and MANY thank you's for Yami getting his boney ass whupped! That was so awesome when Marik wacked him over the head with the rod, I've always wanted to see him do that to somebody. *grin*
I hope Seto sends his "public relations department" over to take care of Diane.....she sucks aesereserves a painful, nasty, bloody death.




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