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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person ShadowofLight
schedule June 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
First, Seto is taking this really well. I guess we should be very thankful janime didn't turn out to be born a girl but he is also a very caring parent. Janime is very sweet too, I can picture him and 'daddy'. As for bakura, I really hope he doesn't kill malik. i don't blame him but i gotta know! and yugi will eb alright? *heaves great sigh* oh thank you! as always loving your story.
person SweetMisery
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love this chapter...not the events in it mind you but i really love this story, i look forward every week to coming to my computer and seeing your updates
person Terra
schedule June 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Very sweet and very heartbreaking in the same chapter. Good job with Jaimen.
person MarikIshtar77
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thanks to you I'll have super soft silky hair today! I left my conditioner in a half hour while I was reading this last chapter, it was just too good toe mye my eyes off of! Gods, where do I start? I guess I'll start with Jamien. I already love him.....and I'm proud of Joey for being so accepting of him. As for Bakura, whoa....he's taking this virus pretty hard! I wonder if he'll still feel the need to make a pound cake after he's all better? When Bakura and Marik converse, it's priceless! I absolutely love the way you handle their snappy remarks at each other.
Very nice work:-)
C.L.
person Lady Elfskye
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What an ASS!! Yami so needs to have his ass kicked again!! This time by Yugi!! But first he needs to know what is going on!! Poor Jaimen!!! Head lice is nasty!! I know!! I know that once it was "official" that Seto would be Ok with it, its the kids that I am worried about!! At least Hayden seems OK with it. So far. Mokie is the one I am sorta worried about. I mean, here he has a *real* half-brother out there, and never knew about it. Kinda like Noa. Aria too. Oh well! Thank you for the great chappie!! It started my 9 year anniversary off on a good note!! I am gonna have some fun tonight though!! Take care!!

Lady Elfskye
person LittleUke Io
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww, I love Kaiba's new son! He is SO KAWAII~! I can't wait to see what will happen when the others meet him! ^-^
person Xeno
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Marik's on Viagra??!!?? *ROTFLMAO*

I never realized that Joey had good maternal instincts...kinda sorry I bashed him in one of my deals.
Seto and Joey can take care of Jaimen...the little chibi is kinda growing on me.

Hugs...Xeno
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hayden took that better than expected (to me anyway). Jamien is such a sweet child and Seto... I'll be honest, I have no idea what to think but please, make that bitchy whore aunt of his pay? A dog collar on a child? *begins cursing silen So So Yami is stealing Yugi's youth? HOW DARE HE!!!!!!!!! ... Sorry about that. Poor Bakura, man he's really getting up there and marik--viagra? *stilfes laughter* I better go but waiting anxiously for the next chapter *runs off to laugh in privacy*
person Liann
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*hands baku back* he was bein defective again lol i feel so bad for him!! he cant die!! T_T
gawd, you sorta have to feel bad for everybody... diane's (I dont mean to make this sound bad but) dumpin jamien (how ever you spell it) on seto, baku...is sorta dying all over again..., marik and his...problem (lmao) JUST EVERYBODY!!!!!!!!!!!!

so, was there ne thing that explained what happened to yugi? if there was, i missed it. or is it next chappie? i feewl so bad for him too *cant stop feeling bad for everybody even if nothing happened to them* im probably forgetting something and ill remember it once i send this but this is all i remember *glomps ryou and malik*
person star
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey ya i gueeess you don't feal that much of doing anything when your sick but at least they did get him bback .so is Yugi getting sick too he is getting grey hair . it sounds like yami is haveing abad time good he desirves it I like the extraa child that giveees it a twist i think
see ya later keep up the good work.
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