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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Lady Elfskye
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
GO YAMI ATEN!!


Oh, my Ra, NO!!!! You cannot kill them!! You can't!! You won't................Will you???? This is sooo not cool. Yami needs to pay dearly! And soon!! Ra, damn it!! No, I won't hunt you down, cause if I do, then you can't finish the story. But Sunday!! Man, oh, man, I don't think I can wait that long!!!

Lady Elfskye
person Xeno
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! NOT POOR YUGI!!!! He doesn't deserve to suffer like this! *starts to cry*

Please, don't let Yugi be hurt...it will just kill me!

Xeno
person ChibiMisu
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
great chapter!! ^_^ But what's going to happen to Yugi?! o.O
person LIttleUke Io
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
DAMN Took me ALL week to get back on this site. It was being such a pain in the ass. Any way, just read the last two chapters. Awsome as always ^-^ and poor Bakura. I really hope they find the cure for the the virus soon.
person Star
schedule June 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this a good chapter keep up the good work . Yami has turned into a reeal jerk I hope someone beatm fom for hurtiing yugi.Poor bakura hees getting it bad give's hiim a hug .
person Liann
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i told you i'd forget something... right after i sent it, i realized the life force thing. ^_^''''''''' man, i feel so bad for so many characters right now... baku and marik for the yami virus, yugi for the way yamis treating him, miranda being mistaken for amunet and rayna, jaimen just for everything bad that's happened to him an *starts suffering from thinking too hard* XD
is there going to be a setoxryou lemon? everything seto said on the phone was just so... suggestive ^.^taketakes plushie squealing* UPDATE AWAY~~~~~~~~~~!!!! *dies*
person Terra
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Everyone's gest est fear when they care for someone with Alzhiemers.
Thank you for ruining Nacho cheese now! Lover will proy way want to buy a case of the stuff though.
Nice job. I liked it.
person Terra
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aren't you the organized angel, two in one day. Lucky us.
Goodie more Jaimen, I love that kid, he's so cute.
How come Aria accspted Jaimen when she didn't en aen at first??
Yami the jerk is at it again.

CAn't wait for update, I guess being sick has a few benefits. LOL
person Xeno
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Stop making me cry! **wipes tears from eyes and cheeks**
If anything bad happens to Jaimen, I will so have to spank you!!

See what happens...I'm outta the loop for a few days and all heck breaooseoose.

Luvs-Xeno
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh sorry then. Next time I'll e-mail you it privately. Well aff.net is finally up so I can review and first, poor Bakura. At least Miranda knows what's going on so she wasn't lost or anything. But Yami... please tell me he's gonna suffer in the Poo Poor Yugi and Yami finds Bakura in a room alone? *cringes* Bad mental image. Jamien is cute and hey now he has a REAL family that loves him. and I think Aten has a new playmate ^^ I'm happy.

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