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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Liann
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*squeezez aten* wai! you make him so kawaii and funnie!! even in baby of mine he doens't know what he's saying XD i just lub ur fanfics! theyr the bestest!ns ans around squeezing yugi ryou bakura malik marik and aten plushies* =D
person Star
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey this storie gets better as it goees . Ii see yame is finely showing his spots you know the lepard showing his spots . So woould he realy hurt yugi ? I didn''t think marik would ever be nice to yugi thats cool . but it sseems he rreealy isn;t inany condition to protect anyone. but what do iknokeep uuup the good work
person Jupitor Knight
schedule June 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi...Have ya missed me. I have been reading your story but its been so crazy here and i've had trouble making AF work here that i've been unable to leave reviews. but I'm back. I love how your taking this story its very good. But i'm concerned. How much will you age the yami's before you cure them. It seems almost cruel. Marik for the most part seems ok but what about Bakura couldn't maybe find a temporary fix for him? Please for me.....For this one person who went back and read all the chapters in this arch...Please. I'm begging here. well later
person Lady Elfskye
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*evil grin* I love it when you grin like that!! Something evil usually happens to the bad guys!!!

Wow!! Another great chappie!! As usual!! GO CHIBI YAMI ATEN AN ARIA!! Go YUGI!! *snickers at Aria* No one but Umi, huh?? LOL!! I'm glad that she hasn't decided to hate Jamien at least! Totally rockin' chappie!! Daniel is bad!!!

Waiting patiently for Tuesday...

Lady Elfskye
person ShadowofLight
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awww that last part was so sweet!! Hee poor Daniel, well a Xmas baby sounds really cute! I was nearly a Halloween baby myself. Ooh think of all the candy you can get on your birthday! Marik still cracks me up, Bakura is safe with his family, Yugi is away from Yami, and Seto is having freaky visions. Okay *giggles then sighs in relief then prays and cuddles Yugi plushie while trying to burn Yami plushie into ashes and tried to burn those ashes some more then gets worried aboutb the visions* What can i say? You're great! Booster packs ooh i almost bought some in mexico!! please you gotta tell me what new cards tehy have! *giggles* now i'm jealous.
person Xeno
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
If Marik is having a hard time keeping up with his Rod, I'd be willing to hold it for him. *evil grin*

*sighs*This story is so good and I'll be sad when it's all said and done.

Luvs and Hugs-Xeno
person Liann
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*stares at baku's butt* <3!!! XD
YUGI NO GO!!! COME BACK~~~~! *reaches out for yugi and kills yami in the process* yami's so stupid an mean to everybody... BUT THATS WHY WE ALL LOVE HIM!!! *squeezes yami* lol
yami: *choking and gagging*
liann: *goes off and reads more of Baby of Mine* -^_^-
person Liann
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
adding onto my other one...
i think my computer is defective... i had written that yami was so stupid and mean to everyone right before the 'THATS WHY WE ALL LOVE HIM' thing and it died for some reason... *runs off with yugi* Xd
person star
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi agian im just adding to my review from earlyer my computer was being weird , Why can't yami act civil being a brute isn;t the way to get people to like you. and be loyal , To anser the question what is yami going todo im goingto try to be funny your the author so ill guess , hes going to pay backbakura for attacking him and maybe remind him who his master is even though he isn't bay be he will try to be friends not .
So how many chapters do we have until we get a cure , sence supposealy Areas blood has cureing propitys acording to that bitch of a doctor sory shes just wrong. i hope they find a cure soon.

person ShadowofLight
schedule June 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ohnonono!! *waving arms frantically* Yugi you crazy goof jump!! That's not the Yami you fell in love with!! Ooh all these cliff-hangers is enough to give me gray hairs again but it jsut makes me love it with every new chapter. Ooh Ancient Sanctuary is suppose to be like the ebst series out there too! ^^