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for The Yami Virus

by Aten

person Gigi
schedule April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The story is so rich!! I felt like I was watchin one of those fast paced soap operas! The writing is so natural and it felt warm too. Great! I can't wait to get back to reading!!
person Miki
schedule October 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
WOW!!! I first want to say that I have been reading you work for a long time but I just haven't really got time to write a post. I don't know why but I don't really post that often but you are a special case! I love your stories. You have got to be in my top five fanfiction writers. You're so awesome! Tehe did you know that my cousin also has a speech problem like aten's. It's so weird. but yea. Have you ever read Anchor to my Insanity? I think that is a awesome fic! If you get the chance, look it up!
person Kat
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooo not only will I not see Halloween the same way, I showed a couple of others that little scene and had grown men in hysterics. *smirks*

Shiiiit, hell of a cliffhanger to leave us with! Oh wait, Wednesday?! Sweeet! I can wait that long. Now I just have to wrack my brain and remember who Dom is. La

Hope you're feeling better!

Kat
person Jupitor Knight
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
sorry my mistake for some reason i was thinking that the twins were born on halloween. Don't know where that came from. Great story thank you soooooooooo much for my lemon. it was short but intense, I like how Seto just couldn't draw himself away even with someone coming in the room. I hope your grandfather is ok. My grandfather last year had a type of throat cancer he still has not recovered his voice although the chemo is done, but he's a fighter and he's getting better. I hope your grandfather is going to be ok. He'll be in my thoughts and prayers.
person Jupitor Knight
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
can't wait for tomorrow. Good job and your right about the opal my sister was born in october i should of known that. my bad.
person ShadowofLight
schedule September 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So sorry to see a good story end but there is the sequel, the proverbial light at the end of the tunnel. Ooh if I were in Seto's shoes (and hte others) I would leave no stone unturned and makee the they will eb tortured until their beg to cease to exist. But hey, that's jsut me. You are by far one of my favorite authors and I respect your very unique sense of writing. You actually pull the reader within!! Almost like we're feeling the same anguish and joy the characters are feeling.*bows deeply* I am not worthy!!
person Kitty Ryou
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Wonderful writing as usual! You never cease to amaze me!! The kids are just too adorable and Ryou is such a sweetie!!! I love you characterization more than anything else in the world! I had missed a few chapters... okay like ten... and I spent all night reading them until like 6AM!! But it was sooo worth it! And I loved the Ryou's birthday chappie. I actually have the same birthday as Ryou, and he's my favorite character, September 2nd! Go me! *is happy that she is now 15* But it made me sad that the kids had to go back to school, and Robbie and Aten were separated! They are just too sweet! Anyway, a bit off the subject, but throughout your stories you always mention what happened to Ryou and BAkura in the past, but you don't really have a story about it? Do you plan on making a story about the past when Bakura was abusive? I think that it would be a great story! *i love ryou so much he needs torture lol* But anyway, great great great story! I can't wait for the following chapters and sequels!!!! :)
person Kitty Ryou
schedule September 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Wonderful writing as usual! You never cease to amaze me!! The kids are just too adorable and Ryou is such a sweetie!!! I love you characterization more than anything else in the world! I had missed a few chapters... okay like ten... and I spent all night reading them until like 6AM!! But it was sooo worth it! And I loved the Ryou's birthday chappie. I actualave ave the same birthday as Ryou, and he's my favorite character, September! G! Go me! *is happy that she is now 15* But it made me sad that the kids had to go back to school, and Robbie and Aten were separated! They are just too sweet! Anyway, a bit off the subject, but throughout your stories you always mention what happened to Ryou and BAkura in the pabut but you don't really have a story about it? Do you plan on making a story about the past when Bakura was abusive? I think that it would be a great story! *i love ryou so much he needs torture lol* But anyway, great great great story! I can't wait for the following chapters and sequels!!!! :)
person Caterfree10
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Konichiiwa!

Oh yeah! Like father Like daughter, teach that bastard a lesson, guys! *LAughs maniacally* Picturing the punishmentEricEric's brother was SOOOO sweet! ^_^ Anyways, Been a while since I've reviewed so I thought I would (Although I should be heading for neopets.com to get my pet back into a hotel no thanx to my ra damned comp not behaving right=P). Well, it's getting better and batter as always and I'm sure will get better as it drawsto a close. Speaking of, I'm starting to think this story's your longest one yet... Ah well. I have to go anyway. My pet's not gunna feed itself!

Ja Ne! ^_~
person ShadowofLight
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay Aher is weird but I would so love to join him int he fires. A changed man--Excuse me fora moment *leaves room to c, ra, rant, scream, and break stuff. Returnes* I needed to get that outta my system. Justic is BLIND. Also, Eric and Jason got what they justicly deserve. I don't beleive in alot of stuff but i do bleieve what sow sow in this life you reap in another. And soemtimes, one must play judge, jury, and executioner. Love teh kids' costumes and love the kids. Here *hangs them bag of candy* Sweets for the sweets and of course sugar-less sweets for Aten. Gotta love Halloween ^.~