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for 15 Minute Dreaming

by RyuArashi

person Rez
schedule March 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Grrr! Hurry up and update! This is such a cute little story that I know will be deliciously delectable soon. So please update. I can't wait! (well, obviously I can, but that's not the point) Hurry up and post!
person Firecat
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You know what, you suck. . . .stupid cliff hanger. . .and I was really getting in to it too.
person Rez
schedule February 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
My oh my! This sounds deliciously delightful! I suggest you keep typing and post soon. I od not like to be kept waiting for updates. Especially when the updates promise to have the slightest citrus if not full out lemon. I implore you, post the next chapter. This story just seems too good to pass up.
person Neo Qwerty
schedule February 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NQ: *squeaks as her Yami comes in, his face set in normal I-want-more-Yaoi-especially-lemon mode*
YA: Write more, onegai? *makes Mokuba-puppy-dog eyes*
NQ: *mutters* I'm cuter than you are... *outloud* Yeah, please write more, RyuArashi-sama! *Yugi-puppy-dog-eyes look*
YA: *cuter Ryou-puppy-dog eyes*
NQ:en cen cuter Chibi-Jounouchi-puppy-dog eyes*
YA: *Really cuter Chibi Ryou-puppy-dog eyes*
NQ: *cold Seaibaaiba death glare*
YA: *gulps*
NQ: *xtremely cuter Chibi-Kitty-Yugi-puppy-dog eyes*
Both: MORE!!! *does kawaii-chibi-kitty-Yami-puppy-dog-eyes*
person SARAHandKAT
schedule February 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Sarah: That is re goo good. I'm new to this site, and your story is the first I've read here. It's really awesome. I love the angst!
Kat: Yeah, it's cool. I can't wait for more.
Sarah: Same here. Get more out soon and I'll be back! Ja!
Kat: Ja!
person Amanda
schedule February 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
really good...i like! please continue!
person KK^_^
schedule February 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Hi! This is adorable! But now you have to finish. You can't leave them like that! I want action! Yugi/Yami is so cute, and I love the way you set it up with the dream thing. Now they need to get together, okay?

PPPPLLLEEEEAAASSSEEE!!!!!

KK^_^
person Leslie
schedule February 10, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Update soon!! I'm SO looking forward to the next chapter...
person Iyasu
schedule February 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You have to update soon! Me and my Best Friend were reading this and we were like "Ahh, shit!" when it was over. Great story!
person DracownyGirl
schedule February 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WA! How can you leave us hanging like this! *pouts* You HAVE to write more soon!!!