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ACK! How can you DO that to me?!?!?! NO FAIR!!! OOOHHH...you'd better update soon!! *soots author death glare*

OH MI GOD!!!! I like this story, I really really do! This is awesome..go Yug Yugi and Yami!! Hmm, a third party..hell, how about Joey? He IS a hottie you know, and he already loves Yugi...but that could mess up their friendshipe couldn't it? *snaps fingers* Gosh darn! Er war way, update soon...you're a great writer, and I love this!

LD: Ahhhhh *bashes evil cliffie with laptop*
Karen: Ahhhh *snatches laptop from LD*
LD: Make Jou the third, it is the obvious choice...besides, I don't care for Anzu.
Karen: *petting her laptop* Oh, so it is all about what YOU want, isn't LD? BTW, this story is really cool...humor with a touch of angst. I really liked the dream sequence...
LD: Geeze, and here I thought I was the lemon obsessed psycho... please update again soon!

when i come up with a better way for you to keep us interested, i'll let you know. Obviously you don't think cliffhangers and a good story are enough. Yeah, i said good story. But can we get the next piece faster than this one? Plllleeeeeeaaaaaassseeee!!!!!

I think the relationship is very believable. The lovey feeling plus the sexual stuff makes the whole thing very sexy....Very nice description and vocab too. :) I'm glad I came across this when it had a second part.

KEEP GOING! U are killing me here! U are a great writer. Your piece flows. I liked how u incorporated other elements into Yugi's life, even if it does take it longer to get to the sex stuff :) Yep, I'm a pig.

Great fic!!! Please continue!! Just so you know, in conversation in most Japenese magna and anime, Yugi never calls his dark side Yami, he usually calls him "Me Boku No Me". (literally "The Other Me") And most japenese style magna or animes have suffixes, such as -kun, -chan, -san, for people who are close to you (I dont know much about how that works) and for most Japenese schools, students will address thier instructor by thier last name followed by -sensi. For someone very important the suffix -sama (honorable) will be used. I have a website written down somewhere and if i can find it ill post it. I hope this stuff can be of some use to you.

AHHHHH! You can't end it THERE! That's not Fair! *cries* I want my smut! I like a lot! Continue please!

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Write more soon now please I love this story please write more please

Please finish this fic! I beg you! I'll be your slave if you want! YamixYugi is my fav pairing, and I can't wait to see what happens next! ::gets down and begs:: please!