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for 15 Minute Dreaming

by RyuArashi

person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!Why must you leave us there? Why?! ;-; Ina rna read more more more more more more more more more more more!!!!!! ONEGAI?!!!!!!!!! Can't wait for yummy steamy and all that kind of things l! UP! UPDATE ASAP NOW! PRETTY PLEASE WITH A YAMI ON TOP? ARigato for the awesome fic! Oyasumi Nasai!
Y&Y4EVER!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: Evil, evil author!
DD: I can't believe we were left hanging like that!
YD: Well, I suppose we souldn't talk
DD: You have a point yami.
YD&DD: UPDATE!!
person KK^_^
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You're lucky you're on-line, or I would kill you for th But But you've done one of the best "Yugi-thinks-Yami-doesn't-like-him-because-he-was-too-quiet" scenes I've ever read. Yami never shuts up during his duels, but when it comes to something important... Update soon, please!
person Neo Qwerty
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Are you aware that you make peeps suffer?! AAAAAAARRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHHHH! We're all gonna become psycho!!! Ruuuuuuun! Run away from the cliffies!!!!!!!!!!!! Even if the story is that good!!!!!!!
person Karanda
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Omote Baku: I really liked this! I didn't think it would be too good (I'm not all that fond of Yami/Yugi pairings for some reason, though I'll reaem) em) but this was completely awesome. Write more! I mean it now! XD
Yami Baku: Yeah, write more, or my omote's going to cry all over you.
Omote Baku: *teary eyes*
Yami Baku: ...*drags omote off* Come on, you. No crying on the authors, or you're going back to the soul room.
schedule April 22, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Karen: Evil cliffie. Evil, evil cliffie
LD: * bashes evil cliffie with laptop *
Karen: * snatches laptop from psycho alter ego *
LD: Oh, you had better update again soon!
Karen: And don't worry about first time lemons... everyone has to start somewhere!
person holo
schedule April 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!1111111
how dare u .........
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2003 at 12:00 AM

....................................*takes deep breathe*
CONTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTINNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!
person Anon
schedule April 15, 2003 at 12:00 AM
this story is great. put up some more chapters.
person Kairi
schedule April 14, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love this story SOOO much! The third person in the Love Triangle? Who else but me? lmao They are so incredibly sexy! I want both Yugi and Yami soooooo much! Yeah, but, I can dream. Well, if it can't be me, it might as well be Anzu....or Jou.....or, an interes ide idea to think about, making it a 4 lover relationship and adding in Honda and Ryou....hmmm.....intersesting....well, needless to say, your story is GREAT! And, YOU PEOPLe BETTER REVIEW!! 10 REVIEWS!!!! I WANT TO READ MORE!!!! *Looks menacingly evil with glowing eyes* MWHAAA!!! *Calms down* Ahem....Sorry....I love your story, please update soon!!!