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for 15 Minute Dreaming

by RyuArashi

person storm
schedule June 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
oh you are so dead, you cant leave me like this literally damn \, finish hurry i hate cliffhangers dammit to hell urgh -_-'
person KK^_^
schedule June 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
You and your damn cliffhangers. You know, of course, that this means you REALLY have to write more of this. I for one would be very upset...and I'll bet Yami would be if you left them where they are, too! *giggles* Not done yet or nthatthat was a great chapter. I'm glad I kept a lookout for it! It was reeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaalllllllyyyyyyy hot... Yami lends himself to those situations easily, ne? Update, please? Before the anticipation comes and gets us all!
person Difinity
schedule June 26, 2003 at 12:00 AM
O______O UPDATE NOW~!!!!!
person Ryo Gin
schedule June 25, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Continue this god damn it!!!!! ARG!!!! Please please PLEASE continue!
person Jadesaber
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is good. I hope you post the rest soon! I like the way their relationship was realized. Please post soon?!
person Keysha
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
*sharpening her very large machete* ARRRGGGHHHH!!! The lemon was just heating up!!! *stabs cliffie repeatedly* Damn, Yami is sexy as hell, ain't it? I waitiaiting on you to finish this story... you rule!!! Please finish the lemon soon!!!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: *holds up a sharp, pointy knife* You know...Bakurasgirl and I were just talking last night about how you did this to us with the last chappie.
DD: *eyes knife* Yeah...and they weren't happy.
YD: *reaches into back pocket and hands DD her pocket knife* She did say she figured she'd be stabbed.
DD: Well, oneoption to save yourself...UPDATE!!
person The Mystical Dragon
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Stabbed? maybe? Boiled in oil... too nice.... thrown off a cliff? that seems like it Just Kidding
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule June 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Well...I wouldn't go as far as stabbing you. I'm not that mean, but I am upset that it ends there.... ; _ ; PLEASE HAVE LOTS LOTS MORE OUT VERY SOON! ^_^ ONEGAI! Pretty please with a kawaii Yuugi-chan on top?! ^_~ Heeheehehe I LOVE THIS FIC SO MUCH AND I WANT MORE SUPER SOON! I really do! ^-^ ARIGATO! Ja ne!!
~Y&Y4EVER~
person YamiKaito
schedule June 23, 2003 at 12:00 AM


A/N: I’m so going to get stabbed, aren’t i?

...No... Not yet, butmighmight be an option in the future
HikariKaiti: YAmi what did I say about threatening people? I LOVE THIS FIC ISSSSSOOOOOOO KAWAII!

YamiK: Exactly why i want it finished! *eyes glow menacingly*
HikariK: Yami.. if you do that again then I will never draw another Yaoi Bakura pic
YamiK: NO NOT THAT! *turns BIG Puppydog eyes on author* I wont hurt you.. SO PLEASE FINISH *sniffles*
HikariK: Thats Better... LOL... I want to see what happens next.. Are you gonna write a sequel where Jounouchi finds someone?