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for 15 Minute Dreaming

by RyuArashi

person KC
schedule December 8, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Me: *blushes* that was hot!!!
Yami: *keeping quiet*
Me: u r so mean to do like that to us!!!
Yami: *smirk*
Me: Anywayz, just continue ok???
Yami: *laughs and leaves*
Mhat hat was kind of insane... *sighed* she's kinda mad at me but please continue all right??? Can't wait and don't keep us waiting for the next chappie!!! CONTINUE!!! *walks away*
person Linda
schedule August 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
can't wait to see what yugi does to yami in the next chapter
person shadowfire
schedule August 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Evil child...i want a lemon and i know it will be amazing...i love the story by the way...nice job
person Mercedes
schedule August 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Please hurry. I'm checking every day for an update ;)
person Red Dragon of Egypt
schedule July 30, 2003 at 12:00 AM
RD:*growls in wrathe her wings unfurled her entire body arched in an attack position*grrr Red Dragon here and im not to happy with this delay in the good part of the story none of us are are we my draconian brethens and sisters
Draconian clan:*all have their bodies and wings in the same position as their queen and are growling in fury*no my queen we are most displeased with this turn of event

Black Red Dragon:I most certaintly am quite furious no one makes the Black Red Dragon mistress of all torment and protecter of my queen/sister and the royal family wait while something she loves dearly is being finished u better finish this author or they'll be no counting to the trouble u will get right my kin

DC:yes mistres BRD we are quite anxious for this story to finish and are ready to make this author pay for making us all wait including our queen
RD:well there u have it author nice and quite lovely fic BUT I SUGEST U FINISH OR ILL BE MOST DISPLEASED U HAVE BEEN WARNED well TTFN ta ta for now
DC,BRD:TTFN ta ta for now
ALL:^_~
person AngelicMouseGirl
schedule July 29, 2003 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =( Come on! IT can't stop there!!! =( MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MMOREMORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ONEGAI! PRETTY PLEASE!!!!! I LOOOOOOOVVVEEEEE THIS TO DEATH! REALLY! Seme Yuugi is sooooo awesome too! Yummy and I can't wait for the next chappy. This is sooo kawaii and hot and yummy and I REALLY WANT MORE NOW! ONEGAI??!!!!!!!! ^___________________^ DOMO ARIGATO! ^_~ Oyasumi Nasai!
person Dragondreamer Yami Dragon
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
YD: WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????
DD: Calm down, Dragon!!!!
YD: But...but...oh GODS! *faints*
DD: OO Well, congradulations! you're the very first author to make my yami pass out! *gives thumbs up* How about a quick update?
person Blowpop
schedule July 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
WHERE'S MY FUCKING LEMON! *calms down* heh sorry...temper...update ASAP plz!
person Naomi
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Pleease continue it! Er.. please exuse my lack of words.. but seriously, though! Great work!
person shadowfire
schedule July 2, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Yep...i got the knife right here but i can't kill you yet since you have to finish the story...lolx. This is one lemon that i have read the whole way through partly because it was well written and i recognized the name of the story...don't remember reading it though but o well...nice job...excellent...can't say enough words...keep writing good lemons and hope to read the next chapter...
Beautiful stor by the way *-*