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by soracia

person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Babe, if I didn't recognize the title, I wouldn't have known this was you. As beautiful as when I read it earlier this morning on the group site. You deep angsty writers all make me dizzy with all your profound insights into the psyche of Seto and Yami. @_@

That's why I stick to the gutter. It's what I'm best at.


later hon-

cve
person Reili
schedule April 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow . . . . that was so pretty. I loved how you did this. I don't know if i'm just on crack or something, but this sounded really poetic to me. Usually i skip over stories like this but for some reason i sat down and read yours and I am *really* glad I did. It was so well done. Good mechanics and good of of your word use. Plus your story had so much empathy for me to use. It was, deep, for a lack of better word use. Beautifully done . . .

~Reili