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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done piece, tightly woven, nice light touch of Seto's insanity, very believeable. Excelent dark story right up to the last chapter.
You know me and you know I love your work but you cheated all of us on this ending. IMHO. I don't think Joey would have simply
stayed at his house after finding out Seto slaughtered his boyfriend waiting for Seto to show up the next morning. And how did Joey get to Seto's?
That would have been a tight scene to include in the story. The switch to Seto in the same room with Joey was so abrupt.
Another point; you did such a beautiful job of spinning out Seto's insanity then at the end when he finaly gets Joey into his clutches, you drop off a cliff.
Where's the rising terror comming from Joey as he realizes that he's trapped by a madman and there is no escape?
As I said. IMHO. Still all in all it was a well done story.
You know me and you know I love your work but you cheated all of us on this ending. IMHO. I don't think Joey would have simply
stayed at his house after finding out Seto slaughtered his boyfriend waiting for Seto to show up the next morning. And how did Joey get to Seto's?
That would have been a tight scene to include in the story. The switch to Seto in the same room with Joey was so abrupt.
Another point; you did such a beautiful job of spinning out Seto's insanity then at the end when he finaly gets Joey into his clutches, you drop off a cliff.
Where's the rising terror comming from Joey as he realizes that he's trapped by a madman and there is no escape?
As I said. IMHO. Still all in all it was a well done story.
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Scaryeakyeaky, insane Seto! Damn, frightening but oh so much fun!! Gods, you completely creeped me out with this. *EG* I love it!
KB
KB
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April 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. And I'm also a Good Charlotte fan and bloody valentine is my favorite song. You made Kaiba a total pshyco.^-^
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Daisy: Ack! Update! Update soon please?? I really love this fic! So dark-ish and twisted! ^.^
Nuva: Kill him! Kill the OC man! Mwuahaha! >D
Daisy: I really need to listen to this song sometime. It's so good. And pretty.
Nuva: DEATH! Kill Romann! KILL! ^____^ And update... but still kill!
Nuva: Kill him! Kill the OC man! Mwuahaha! >D
Daisy: I really need to listen to this song sometime. It's so good. And pretty.
Nuva: DEATH! Kill Romann! KILL! ^____^ And update... but still kill!
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April 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh, the plot thickens! I want to read more of this...pronto!