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for Daze of Paradise

by Kali

person Red Dragon Of Egypt
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Huh lovely well so long as its not to hard on them I suppose its ok but will know soon enough anyways Yami Kali keep up the great work and update soon gtg now JA NE
person Lady Kirei
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, Kali. That was great chapter!! I'm glad that you got rid of those
loose threads and got them out of the way. I can wait for the next chapter!!
*smiles and bows* Bye for now.

Lady Kirei ^_^
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please can you hurry up and update the story please???
person madamebutterfly1983
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story!!!!!
person MinuetLove
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I'm so glad that a new chapter is up! Can't wait to see what happens next!
person k
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, Seto & Jou ALMOST made it, didn't they? While I was reading this part, I was thinking "Oh, yes!", followed shortly by "Oh, no!" I could not think where it might lead, & my mind even conjoured up the vision of the elevator starting up again, arriving at the bottom & the doors opening to reveal the pair of them, unconcious on the floor, & it had all been some sort of surreal, shared dream! A great fic, so far, though. Keep up the good work! Oh, & one more thing... not that I'm complaining or anything, not at all, but how come that Ryou is always seme? I would not have thought that Bakura would be so wiilingly uke all the time! But, then, I would never have known that he & Marik could be so romantic & mushy with their Lights. Yami, yes. He's usually romantic & mushy with Yugi, but it was nice for Ryou & Malik to be on the receiving end of some soppiness this time!
person Hannah
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
w00t! YOU UPDATRED! *tackle glompage* Aww Ryou the Romantic! I was laughing hysterically by the end. Just the thought of the gang running down the street away from the papparazzi like gazzelle away from lions. Hilarious, confusion, romance... I WANT MORE! X_x
person Cheysuli Night
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay! You're here too! That's great since I visit this site more often than that other one.

I love this fic (especially the Ryou/Bakura parts) and can't wait to see how they get out of this mess!

Update soon!
person Hannah
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I have never watched Yu-Gi-Oh.....BUT THIS FIC ROCKS! I'm soo gonna watch it now! I already love Seto, and I think he and Joey are made for each other. Make-out session! *squeals* Update this soon PLEAAASE! Oh mighty Leader *hails*
person MinuetLove
schedule May 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! It's so much fun! Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter! Write more soon please!