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for Your our Bitch

by Shadow2007

person catsblood15
schedule June 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love IT!!!!! continue plz
person Uchihacestluver
schedule November 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Me likey so far please update soon.
person Kiira
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought that this was interesting beginning, it could have been longer though, but I hope you`ll update soon enough =)

You could also but the same marks to all that says that they are speaking; like: "I said" and then tell who says it. I don`t know if my review makes any sense? and this is only my opinion so... :)

But I would like you to continue!
person raptree
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg i must see more!!!!!!!!!!! i need more chapters this fic is looking very promising.
person SkyLark555
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awsome fic please continue it nd update soon
person Anon
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You could do a hell of a lot better.
person noname
schedule May 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was pretty good. It's very interesting. PLEASE update already!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person lil
schedule December 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HEY! Great Story.........hope u will update soon. ^____^ Cant wait then.....................
person Reili
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, so what's going to happen to poor Seto? Something *painful*?