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by crimsonvioleteyes

person blisblop
schedule May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very cute ,but I do not think boys produce the white part of semen until puberty, maybe the clear stuff?I have heard of dry orgasms for little boys,in a fan fic however.Well any boys outthere gonna inform us of the facts?
person KaiwaiiKilala
schedule January 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kilala:*hyper as ever* THATWASSOKAIWAII!!!PLZMAKEANOTHERSTORYLIKETHAT!!ITWASTHEMOSTCUTESTNFORBIDDENSEXIHAVEEVERSEEN.
Kulula:*shakes her head Sorry about meh Yami.She likes this kinda romance and forbidden sex stuff.
Kilala:*glares at her hikari*SHUTURTRAPUDAMNMIDGETBRAT!!ISNOTMEHFAULTTHATIAMINLOVEWITHYAMINTHATITHINKYUGIXYAMI,SETOXYAMI,BAKURAXYAMI,NJOEYXYAMIROMANCERSOKAIWAIII!!! =^-_-^=
Kulala:=^-_-^= I have no idea wat u just said.N how many pixies or straberry pocky u ate.
Kilala:*blink*YDOCHUASK?
Kulala:*steps away from her hyper n genki Yami*
Kilala:ANYWAYPLZMAKEMORESTORIESLIKETHATPLEASEWITHSTRABERRYONTOP!! =^n_n^= *big kitty chibi eyes*
person Shakster
schedule April 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, so u wrote a new Seto/Yami story.. woohoo.... I love Anmcient Egyot as I told you... and they're so cutr when they're young... I'd be for a sexy sequel.... with those gorgous bishies a little older...... ^_^
person Moonlitspire
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
^__^ this was definitely an interesting story. shall i say...adorable? hehe, i've seen some parts of that doujin, courtesy of you, of course, and i'd say that reading this story is just as good as looking at the doujin since i cant read japanese. ^^;; thanks for writing it, and good job!
person yamislove
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Girlfriend,

So kawaii and yummy! just adore how Seto and Yami discover each other.
I'm ao glad to see you writing again, your one of the best.
Can't wait for your next!

love ya,
yamislove
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey CVE! Welcome back. I've missed your updates. Damn, that was pretty hot. LoL. Could you PLEASE write a sequel or two?

lots of luv,
AL
person Deb
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Lol this was cute!!! I really liked this! I guess its how it could have started hehe ^__^
Anyways, it was great!!
Lotsa Luv and Huggles
Debs xxx