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by Shakirah

person Horizont
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay, one thing *I* see is that Yugi is definitely not the only one in this fic who needs to see a therapist... honestly, Joey's close to a panic when it comes to relationships and quiting them or whatever... Tristan tried to commit suicide, Bakura is just a bit violet ("he's alive"... oh well) and I wonder what kinds of problems Yami and Seto come up with... *lol*
Well I underestimated Joeys hate towards Seto ás well as the influences of his last boyfriend. So WHO THE HELL was it? Duke? Come on, it's him, right????? So Tristan and Joey are in a fight...
And why is it going to be Yami's fault? What's he doing? Friday... it's not that long... Friday...

Hope I'll stand wai wait!
Horizont ^_^x
person Day dreamer
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gasp*! Evil cliffy !!!!! seto is such an ass, i hope he gets what he deserves
person DirtyD
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ughhh, you have to forgive me Shakster. I can't review. I've been more crucial to stories of late. Any little thing in them I don't like annoy's me, your story wasn't an exception. Wow, this almost seems like a nice flame or something huh? But seriously I've been too negative to all stories lately it seems. Must be a reflection of things going on in my life. If it makes you feel better most of my harbored dislike is aimed at Seto, is seeming like this nice guy. I loto hto hate him, and now I have this feeling him and Yami will still end up together (probably start over or something.) As I see this, as long Seto was evil I could hate him. I have alot of hate in me right now. I hate this. Even rereading my review is making me angry. >_< Issues anyone?
person cve
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Baby Girl-- you and your damn cliffhangers. Glad to see some tender bakuraxyugi moments. And whats going on with Tristan's folks. haha to see Joey win in poker was great.

And Seto and Yami are still in the background lurking, I know what you have planned, you evil evil woman you.

Great chappie as always--

My internet lover, I have to whip you back into writing more SetoxYami fics. You're being a bad bad girl---

much love--

cve
person Nancy
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story so much! it rocks my world, keep up the exellent writing
person Terra
schedule August 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful chapter. Such emotion!! It was sweet, hot, loving, tempting...just great in my book! And the little teaser you put in for the next chapter, now that was just mean!! To tease us poor readers that way!

Can't wait, it'll be great as usual.
person Kat
schedule August 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*glomp* You're alive! *smirks* Glad real life intruding meant some fun for you. *blinks* Musta been some pictures.

Loved this chapter. Dayum that lemon... I think you just raised the temperature for the entire state of California. Okay, maybe just Silicon Valley.ey dey did say it'd be hotter today. *snickers*

I really liked the interaction between Bakura and Yugi. That's fantastic.

OOOOOOOO Tristan is so in trouble for working out with Seto. Have both he and Bakura fogotten how hot-headed Joey is??

HEY!! So, what did they do to Malik??!?! Details, details. *snickering* Bloodthirsty much, me? *innocent look*

Great to see you back!

KB
person Renee
schedule July 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! ^_^ Poor Yugi...at least he's healing a bit now though.

( T_T no more sex scenes between kura and Yugi!! *bawls*)
person Ashla
schedule July 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't review the last part. I was away and when my mom, dad and sisters stopped down to meet me two weeks ago I had them print out the last part and bring it with them for me ^^ It was my birthday prezzie! Heehee. I knew they had it and I was on edge all day, dying to read it, but I couldn't until they left. It was great! Now, for this part ^^
Oh, that teaser looks really interesting! ^^ I wonder what Bakura's responce to that will be? Great part! That piece with Bakura and Yugi saying they love each other was so sweet! Great work! ^^ Lol, you menchioned psyical stuff again in your note at the end. You've been so good with the last few chappies! So clean of all that randy business, heehee. I love this fic! I really liked the last few chapters and I can't wait to read more! ^^ Later!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~
person cve
schedule July 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Couldn't leave without leaving you a review, since it will be my last for a while--

I'm so glad to see Yuugi is finally starting to heal, with Bakura there to pick up the pieces. They really are such a splendid pair. And Tristan, the saintly knight-in-shining-armour once again. Adored the fight scene between Bakura and Joey.

Woman--I wish Seto wasn't such a prick in this story. You know I hate to see him portrayed as such a slimeball. But I know everything will work out for the best.

Fabulous chapter once again babe--

much love--

cve cve