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August 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whew! It's about time Yami confronted Seto. Poor Yami. And poor Seto. Ouch! I'm, like, holding my breath for the next chapter!
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God. How could you end it like that?? I've been following your story for quite awhile now and I just HAD to review after that one. BEST CHAPTER YE! !
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*cheers* yes he got what he deserved! bastard! ^^
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*howls* What did Grandpa put in his own crab sushi?! He's funny. That tangent about Bakura's "aliases" and the bird named Petey... I swear, I laughed so hard I had to wipe my eyes. *roars* He's already planning a wedding?! *falls over laughing* Priceless, Grandpa is just fucking priceless!
“It wasn’t that I was trying to be dishonest. Baby, I just knew you wouldn’t understand.” *considers hitting Tristan with a lead pipe for that stupid remark*
"I should have asked you how you felt about the situation before I made it a regular thing." *puts lead pipe down*
*cackles* I didn't know that there were that many shades of black. I guess I shouldn inn in my "girl" card. Ohhhh, so _that's_ how you get a man to get ready faster! Damn, all these years I've just nagged. *laughs* Gods those two are perfect for each other: spoiled boys wanting constant attention.
*cheers* NAIL HIS ASS TO THE WALL, JOEY! Woohoo! Hit 'im again! Awwww, don't make him stop. You no fair! *pouts*
*claps hands over mouth* Joey! You fool! You idiot! You just had to tell him that!
*grins* Hit him again! on Yon Yami, do it! Whoa.... what a scene! Seto as a sex addict. Yup, I can see that.
Yeah, why did you let him get drunk? You know he ends up starting conversations by sticking his foot in his mouth. *grins* Gods, does Tristan ever stop flirting?!
Nice teaser! I can't wait to read that chapter. I'm also going to hope that Yugi doesn't screw things up with Bakura or Kura or whatever alias he's using today. *smirks* Maybe Petey?
Love it girl!
“It wasn’t that I was trying to be dishonest. Baby, I just knew you wouldn’t understand.” *considers hitting Tristan with a lead pipe for that stupid remark*
"I should have asked you how you felt about the situation before I made it a regular thing." *puts lead pipe down*
*cackles* I didn't know that there were that many shades of black. I guess I shouldn inn in my "girl" card. Ohhhh, so _that's_ how you get a man to get ready faster! Damn, all these years I've just nagged. *laughs* Gods those two are perfect for each other: spoiled boys wanting constant attention.
*cheers* NAIL HIS ASS TO THE WALL, JOEY! Woohoo! Hit 'im again! Awwww, don't make him stop. You no fair! *pouts*
*claps hands over mouth* Joey! You fool! You idiot! You just had to tell him that!
*grins* Hit him again! on Yon Yami, do it! Whoa.... what a scene! Seto as a sex addict. Yup, I can see that.
Yeah, why did you let him get drunk? You know he ends up starting conversations by sticking his foot in his mouth. *grins* Gods, does Tristan ever stop flirting?!
Nice teaser! I can't wait to read that chapter. I'm also going to hope that Yugi doesn't screw things up with Bakura or Kura or whatever alias he's using today. *smirks* Maybe Petey?
Love it girl!
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My, my, my, what goes around, comes around. Looks like everyone is getting their licks in on Kaiba.
Update soon.
Great job.
Update soon.
Great job.
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay I think I totally got into Tristan's point of view for the last few chapters, but I#m back to my very own pov now, so... did Tristan sleep with Duke w/o knowing he had a boyfriend?? Brwon hair...!? Hey I simply LOVE trying to figue out what's behind that! It makes the whole story soooo much more intersting! ^_^x
And Yami and Joey... did they suffer the same way? Does Joey understand the guy he can't stand? And does Yami want to have Yugi back? Or does he like Tristan...? I can't wait to read the next chapter, please please please, update soon, don't let us wait too long!
Have I told you that I think you have an amazing writing talent? Well you do. ^^x
Keep it up!
Horizont
And Yami and Joey... did they suffer the same way? Does Joey understand the guy he can't stand? And does Yami want to have Yugi back? Or does he like Tristan...? I can't wait to read the next chapter, please please please, update soon, don't let us wait too long!
Have I told you that I think you have an amazing writing talent? Well you do. ^^x
Keep it up!
Horizont
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My, my, my, what goes around, comes around. Looks like everyone is getting their licks in on Kaiba.
Great chapter.
Update soon.
Great chapter.
Update soon.
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh my f gawd you can write with the best of them i have never seen such talent it was absolutely beautiful i for one always thought yugi would be more apt to be with tristan than joey but good call um if you wouldnt mind go and join up at http://sn3kers.proboards27.com thanks if you do but if you dont im sorry to have wasted your time it is so wonderful God finally gave me an oppertunity to witness perfection
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG that was like the best! I mean that was good television right there. Even though it's a fanfic you know what i mean. All that time Yami knew huh, And when he confronted him he just slapped him. o.o oh....the shit hit the fan. and the emotion that Yami was going through when he was telling him about how he knew and how he hoped that Seto would stop, but of course he didn't. And i love how Seto was trying to kiss up.^^ LOL and then Yami got all sexy with him, and broke his dick. LOL Oh....i loved that. I wonder what's going to ha nex next. Yami hitting on Yugi sounds kinda funny hehe. Best EVER!!!!! .....i'll stop ranting now.
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August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad Yami finally stuck it to Seto, but that's going to be nothing but problems for Yugi and Bakura, eh. And I've had this theory about who Duke fooled around with for some time now, I think I'll be finding out real soon if I was right. Great chapter.
Akuchan
Akuchan