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for Beauty

by Shakirah

person Horizont
schedule September 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I KNEW IT I KNEW IT

So it WAS Tristan Duke slept with! See? ^^;;;;;
And what a wonderful wonderful world... pardon me, lemon! ^_^x Poor Tristan... I mean he didn't know, how should he!? It's not his fault and even Joey should know that whoever Duke cheated on him with isn't to blame in the first place. It was Duke who made an mistake here! And Tristan shouled know by now that whenever he doesn't tell Joey stuff like that it comes out and gets much worse! They need to talk, they do!

Okay, next part: Don't forget to add a lemon or two!
Other than that: Please update soon! If you're not sure if something who wrote is okay - go after your first feeling cuz too much thinking won't help. ^^x

Ciao!
Horizont
person No-one
schedule September 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! it is great! keep up the good work!
person day dreamer
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay anotehr great chapter! I loved it, but seriosuly yami is such an ass, what will happen to him i wonder
person zehlyah
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
You do realize that you have ingrained in all of us an addiction that will not be satiated until we get the whole story, right? I know I speak for a lot of your readers when I confess to checking this site at least 4 times a week to see if you have updated. Can't wait for the finale. Keep em coming!
person Terra
schedule September 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That chapter was amazing! Man Tristan is very desparate isn't he. Nice portrayal of a guy who thinks he's about to lose his world. And And Yami.... gods so spoiled, claims not to be helpless hmm? I think not.
person kat
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yup, worth the wait! Wow, I actually know someone who handles huge shocks the way Tristan does. Here I thought he was the only one....

“You have a penchant for flaunting that tight body of yours and flirting with any and everything with a dick.” Bakura crossed his arms over his chest. “You like being a little cock tease. You like stirring things up.”

Woohoo, someone told Yami the truth! Go 'Kura!

“All you’re doing is manipulating fruit with your hands. That’s what all gay guys do,”
“I don’t think I can handle balls that big. I’m good, but I’m not that good.” Yugi smirked.
*howls* I love it!!!

Struggle to write? Damn, it was easy to read! I really liked it too. I know, it's the quiet before the mushroom cloud shows, but it was good. *EG* I'm still cackling over Bakura's comments to Yami. Those were priceless and top-notch!

Kat
person sn3kers
schedule August 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARGHHHHHHHHHHHHHH why do you insist on keeping me on edge over and over again.Anyway very nice chappie you need to finish the next chapter soon so we see what happens to Tris and if he starts to play with Yami(that tramp!!!! I can't belive he's hitting on Tristan)
person Horizont
schedule August 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Shakster!

It's true! It *was* Tristan Duke slept with that night!? I knew it all along! I'm sure it was him! ... ^^;;
I'm so excited I can hardly sit still, honestly! Sad thing, really...

So, you're going to update soon, right? Right???
Hope so...
Horizont
person ketall
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Noooo!!! Another cliffie!! This story is really heating up. I think my suspicions about the guy duke cheated with is coming true. Anyway, another great and intense chapter. You are one of my favorite authors!
person Terra
schedule August 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I loved that little plot twist cliffhanger at the end. I think if their love survives this it'll survive anything. Boy can't wait for the next update.