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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
What, like I wasn't gonna review this chapter as well?? *snorts* You should know me better than that. You're in trouble though: real-time review...
Poor Bakura, some days he just can't seem to catch a break. *blinks* When did he become the understanding mother hen for everyone? Damn, it's kinda sexy....
*laughs* Joey as a sacrifice? Nooo, until the night before, only Tristan qualified for that! *grins evilly* Joey "fixed" that little problem thoughblinblinks and drools* birthday cake down Joey's pants? Oooo Tristan would blow that candle out real fast. Joey... make up and hair? *snickers, cackles and guffaws* Yugi is dangerous with that camera. Everyone's gonna be seeing those evil blue spots for days.
Tristan's just looking to wreck it all, isn't he??? Sheesh, and I thought Seto needed help! SEE!!! Yami coc cock tease! I told you! Ahem, okay.... I'll quit yelling now. *blushes* Sorry neighbors... Nice save shark fin.
“Alright, you’re made up, get a room,” Bakura teased.
Yeah! But, you know, take the readers with you!
Joey... Yami... dancing... okay, jaw. in. lap. hot! Damn, I'm so glad I turned on the air conditioner.
*laughs* You know, if it was anyone other than Bakura that Yami was pissing off, I'd have called that little interlude a bitchfest. Bakura's just sooooo not a bitch though.
*shrieks in laughter* an Orgy SUV! Dammit, that's just beyond hysterical! Oooo Tristan and Bakura?? Dayum, I'd like to see that! I swear, this is gonna be my favorite part for a looooong time! "I’m not being sober with the four of you again.” *shrieks and falls over* One of Tristan's best lines!
Yami/Yugi/BAKURA threesome? Okay... brain shutdown... nosebleed. 'scuse me for a moment.
*bangs head on table* Everyone in the bomb shelter... Anyone who thinks that Joey's weak is in for a surprise. Dude, you are gonna be toast.
Ah, the angst, the drama... Damn, this is gotta be your best story EVER! I think it's going to be hours before I pick my jaw up off the floor with that threesome. Didn't expect that at all (bad pun with that "didn't see that one coming" *smirks*) Oh yeah, Bakura and Yugi got some talking to do. Hell, Yami's gonna have to deal with Seto now. *cackles* Let him deny he's a cock tease now! *laughs* I haven't used that phrase this many times in an hour before ever!
Kat
Poor Bakura, some days he just can't seem to catch a break. *blinks* When did he become the understanding mother hen for everyone? Damn, it's kinda sexy....
*laughs* Joey as a sacrifice? Nooo, until the night before, only Tristan qualified for that! *grins evilly* Joey "fixed" that little problem thoughblinblinks and drools* birthday cake down Joey's pants? Oooo Tristan would blow that candle out real fast. Joey... make up and hair? *snickers, cackles and guffaws* Yugi is dangerous with that camera. Everyone's gonna be seeing those evil blue spots for days.
Tristan's just looking to wreck it all, isn't he??? Sheesh, and I thought Seto needed help! SEE!!! Yami coc cock tease! I told you! Ahem, okay.... I'll quit yelling now. *blushes* Sorry neighbors... Nice save shark fin.
“Alright, you’re made up, get a room,” Bakura teased.
Yeah! But, you know, take the readers with you!
Joey... Yami... dancing... okay, jaw. in. lap. hot! Damn, I'm so glad I turned on the air conditioner.
*laughs* You know, if it was anyone other than Bakura that Yami was pissing off, I'd have called that little interlude a bitchfest. Bakura's just sooooo not a bitch though.
*shrieks in laughter* an Orgy SUV! Dammit, that's just beyond hysterical! Oooo Tristan and Bakura?? Dayum, I'd like to see that! I swear, this is gonna be my favorite part for a looooong time! "I’m not being sober with the four of you again.” *shrieks and falls over* One of Tristan's best lines!
Yami/Yugi/BAKURA threesome? Okay... brain shutdown... nosebleed. 'scuse me for a moment.
*bangs head on table* Everyone in the bomb shelter... Anyone who thinks that Joey's weak is in for a surprise. Dude, you are gonna be toast.
Ah, the angst, the drama... Damn, this is gotta be your best story EVER! I think it's going to be hours before I pick my jaw up off the floor with that threesome. Didn't expect that at all (bad pun with that "didn't see that one coming" *smirks*) Oh yeah, Bakura and Yugi got some talking to do. Hell, Yami's gonna have to deal with Seto now. *cackles* Let him deny he's a cock tease now! *laughs* I haven't used that phrase this many times in an hour before ever!
Kat
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October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Have I told you how much I love you? Loved the chapter titles - the calm before the storm. Fabulous work as always, I loved Joey's birthday celebrations, especially the events in the car. Poor Tris - Joey will get over it, won't he? *tears*
Gonna go read the threesome again;)
ttyl
Tanya
Gonna go read the threesome again;)
ttyl
Tanya
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October 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Once more I find myself in awe by you. Thank you so much for writing such an intense and wonderful story about the two most misunderstood charakters in all of YGO-Land. Like all the other novels you write I am simply speechless. Please update soon and as always: Keep the lemony goodness coming ;-)
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Shakster!
You get better at this, creating cliffies I mean.
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But at least he finally told someone! (Tristan)
Most time while reading this art I was kinda happy for Seto's and Yami's situation improving. I so want the two of them together! I started to really like them! Poor Yami... *hugs him* If you love him, you can forgive and help him. He loves you back - I think that Yami is lucky, having a boyfriend that told him about his problems (okay, it took him some time and it needed Joey to reveal it but yeah). But now Seto and him can work out a solution.
Well I gotta do that Biology homework so bye and please update soon!
Ciao!
~Horizont
You get better at this, creating cliffies I mean.
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But at least he finally told someone! (Tristan)
Most time while reading this art I was kinda happy for Seto's and Yami's situation improving. I so want the two of them together! I started to really like them! Poor Yami... *hugs him* If you love him, you can forgive and help him. He loves you back - I think that Yami is lucky, having a boyfriend that told him about his problems (okay, it took him some time and it needed Joey to reveal it but yeah). But now Seto and him can work out a solution.
Well I gotta do that Biology homework so bye and please update soon!
Ciao!
~Horizont
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*several hours and a sunrise pass and Tanya is finally caught up*
OMG! The angst!! I love angst. And Bakura. And, omg, Tristan is really screwed and not in the good way. Joey's gonna freak when he finds out his current boyfriend is the reason he's not already happily married. Ooh, and I thinkYami and Seto are gonna get back together...
Anyway - you've got me hooked. I need more. Soon.
*twiddles thumbs*
love,
Tanya
OMG! The angst!! I love angst. And Bakura. And, omg, Tristan is really screwed and not in the good way. Joey's gonna freak when he finds out his current boyfriend is the reason he's not already happily married. Ooh, and I thinkYami and Seto are gonna get back together...
Anyway - you've got me hooked. I need more. Soon.
*twiddles thumbs*
love,
Tanya
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I once read a New York Times' Best Seller. I do believe they based a e one on the series. Neither were even close to being as good as your story.
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
- Cinder
I can't wait to find out what happens next!
- Cinder
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God! I'm.... I'm.... Shiiiit, I'm beyond speechless! Good God Dayum Girl! This chapter was amazing! I'm floored. You evil thing you, leaving it like that!
Gods, I'll think of something else to say later. Now, I gotta pick up my jaw!
Kat
Gods, I'll think of something else to say later. Now, I gotta pick up my jaw!
Kat
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September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.O!! That chapter was so intense!!!!!!!!!! everything is such a mess right now, its the most intresting chapter so far i think. Dont wait to long for an update^^
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September 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
okay...I normally don't resort to this......pleeeeeeease finish this story...i am SO hooked!!!!
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September 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG that poor honeys! *gives all characters a hug*
Tristan - He ought to tell Joey! I mean Joey *will* find out what happened and who Duke slept with eventually and Tristan *has* to know that!
Duke - It's him who should contact Joey... talk to him, no matter how hard or impossible it seems to be!
Seto - Poor thing, so in love... I hope he gets a chance to properly appologize to Yami. I wthemthem to be together again!
Yami - Imo he shall at least give Seto a chance to explain, no matter if they're going to break up.
Yugi - Who is it you love? Yami or Bakura? Yami isn't that much of a bad guy. He told Yugi he loves someone else and didn't cheat on him. He's just a bit spoiled after living with seto so long.
Joey - One thing I alwayve ave about him is that he's honest. He doesn't hide anger or love. He's the emotional guy. I hope he lets himself enough time to think before he goe berserk boyfriend on Tristan...
Bakura - Didn't appear at all this part. He's jealous and would never lie to Yugi and he's strong and protects him. I like that. ^_^x
Everyone: GODAMMIT SPEAK to each other! You're grwon up enough to know that no problem solves itswithwithout people talking about it and trying to understand each other.gh* gh*
Okay, that's it for now. ^^;;
Baba!
Horizont
Tristan - He ought to tell Joey! I mean Joey *will* find out what happened and who Duke slept with eventually and Tristan *has* to know that!
Duke - It's him who should contact Joey... talk to him, no matter how hard or impossible it seems to be!
Seto - Poor thing, so in love... I hope he gets a chance to properly appologize to Yami. I wthemthem to be together again!
Yami - Imo he shall at least give Seto a chance to explain, no matter if they're going to break up.
Yugi - Who is it you love? Yami or Bakura? Yami isn't that much of a bad guy. He told Yugi he loves someone else and didn't cheat on him. He's just a bit spoiled after living with seto so long.
Joey - One thing I alwayve ave about him is that he's honest. He doesn't hide anger or love. He's the emotional guy. I hope he lets himself enough time to think before he goe berserk boyfriend on Tristan...
Bakura - Didn't appear at all this part. He's jealous and would never lie to Yugi and he's strong and protects him. I like that. ^_^x
Everyone: GODAMMIT SPEAK to each other! You're grwon up enough to know that no problem solves itswithwithout people talking about it and trying to understand each other.gh* gh*
Okay, that's it for now. ^^;;
Baba!
Horizont