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for Beauty

by Shakirah

person Horizont
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi!

Know what? I SO want Seto and Yami to be together again, I can't help it! You really do know how to write that pairing, it's gorgeous! ^_^x
To be honest I seem to develop seomething for sap cuz I only wish for eberybody in the story to be happy... ^^;; The poor thingies... so much to sort out before they can have their respective happily ever afters... *sigh*
Sometime-ish... that's the word, jep. ^^x
And about Joey... maybe he should talk to Duke before he can start to forgive Tristan...

Continue? Please...? *pde*

~Horizont
person blackwidow10
schedule November 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
such a cris story! it just keeps getting better and better...and more and more complicated. ^_^ but thats what makes it good. keep up the good work!
person Chelsea
schedule October 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! Keep up the good work and keep writing!
person Dissention
schedule October 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that last chapter just killed me! i loved the yugi yami bakura action, which was unexpected but hot damn. love your stuff, keep it up
person KayElena
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Whoa....!!! Five letters to describe those chappies: K.I.N.K.Y. As always you've done an outstanding job! Please update soon and keep the lemony goodness coming ;-)
person Cinder
schedule October 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gah! I can't wait for the next update!
- Cinder
person Horizont
schedule October 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi there!

Wow, you really did a great job with these two chapters. It was so touching reading all this... I begin to love the Seto-and-Yami-thing... when I read that kissing scene I almost felt the butterflies Yami felt... I rarely geis ris recently, that feeling of completely understanding the situation of the characters... it's wonderful!
Thank you for it! ^_^x

The Calm before the Storm... poor little kids...
Yami does love Seto but doesn't want to... Bakura loves Yugi and vice versa and then *that* happens... and Joey is once again close to losing his beloved... which makes me looking forward to him meeting Duke even more!

But I guess after posting two chapters at the same time the next one will take some time... can't wait! ^^x

You're a more than talented author, I love your work!
Bye!
~Horizont
person Kat
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh. My. God!!! Joey taking Tristan is just way beyond effing hot! Lordy, I think you almost melted the monitor!!!! Dayum! Awesome, fantastic, nosebleed time...

I love you for making Bakura the voice of reason! He didn't hit him for being dense! I'm beyond shocked at that.

Damn, I feel sorry for Seto. He's getting yanked all over the place. Yami is too a cock tease. I don't care what anyone else says. *cackles* Sometime-ish!! That's it! Yami's g alg all sometime-ish!

Another chapter after this?! Crap, I better turn on the air conditioner.

I'm sooooo glad you're back!

Kat
person deadghost
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY! you updated. I'm so happy. As always and as expected, great job. You are really the best.
I can't wait to know how will this emotion-rollercoaster is going to end... you've really created a monster!
person deadghost
schedule October 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
and your lemons are the best, no doubt about that... so fucking HOT

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