rate_review Reviews

Dear goods sts sts story is FANTASTIC! I love the plot, and the relationships, and the fun, and the angst and....you're a genius.

That was a great date! They both were so sweet and cute!Question: is there really such thing as *murder mystery ...thing (restaurant)*? B/c if thre is, it's really cool place then. And thank you for fast update!!

First date was a smashing success - that dancing could not have been hotter unless they had their clothes off!! I loved the comment Joey made about life being a bitch and Yugi fucking it! Perfect!! Oooo the teaser looks goooood! I can't wait to read that chapter!.

interesting story man (im assumin u r a dude cause theres no way a girl could be this perverted). interesting stuff

Wow! I have to agree with you, Seto is a (horny) bastard, but he was gentle. But he is bad anyway (in this story, b/c I like him too, usually! :P) And don't worry that this chapter was long. It's good, b/c we can read it longer, which is a good thing, don't you think? This one of many things I like about your stories, they have long chapters, so you can just sit down and reallu enjoy it.

YD: *stabs Seto in the eye with the M. Pencil* You're such a dick!
DD: But...but Tris kissed Joey! That was SOOOOOOO sweet!!!
YD; Loving this story so far, but we have a suggestion.
DD: Can you cut down the size of the chapters? It's kinda hard ead ead all of one in one sitting.
YD: Just a suggestion.
DD: Love thiory,ory, hun!!

Hola Shakster! As usual, awesome job. ^_^ Next chapter sounds good too, dancin alwayz makez a good date. ^_^ And hopefully I'll get to see Seto pay for what he did. I just luv torturing him... anywayz, i just have to comment on this line: "You can't measure life by the number of breaths u take, u have to measure it by the number of momentz that take ur breath away." That iz just so kool and awesome and inspiring. did u write that? if u did, u have a completely kool brain, if u didn't, u sure tied it into the story well! ^_^ so, keep up the good work (which shouldn't be a problem for ya!) and update soon, ty pty please. oh, and if u would, send me an email when ya do? ur so kool...and i'm such a suck up. :-P

Aww that's sweet of Yugi. And our fav guys they're like assholes in this one. *slaps Seto and Yami* yeah that's right you jerks. How sweet of you to make our fav guys be assholes together. AWWWW Great like always babe.

Once again an excellent story. I love Tristan, especially Tristan/Joey stories. Your stories are trult the bomb, it's hard to believe, but they keep getting better and better. Keep it up.

Portia

Yayzerz, New Chappie!! ::giggles::
My God, i'm hooked ootheother one of your stories..this isn't good.iousiously, i think i'm addicted or something
Tristan is so cool in this story (got a bit of a therapist thing goin' on, but it's cool *stage whisper:~so do I~* ::grins::)lol but Seto must DIEEE!! YuCk lmao..so slimy..but finally a fic where he's the bad guy! Everyone else (including me ::sheepish grin::) loves him, too, so he's always practically revered in most stories! & yes i just realized i'm ranting & i'll now now ok buh bye! lol

luv ya!
~Spyke

p.s..Thanx for emailin' me! can you do it the next time you update, too??..i'll give you candy *waves candy in front of Shakster's face* (can't bake cookies, so it'll hafta be candy, K? ^^)
Thankoo! ^____^ (oh yea..& if you update soon i'll give you *huggles* & candy-filled Plushies ;D :X