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May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This story is just *aweso Tha That's all I can say...every word esomesome. Hope to see more soon!
Tanya~
Tanya~
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this story is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOo realistic.
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
My compute cra crap-tas-TICCCCCCCC!!! With that said. ^___ was was utterly sweet the way Duke purposed (even if he turned out to be a wolf in sheep's clothing.) Getting the 411 on Joey's backround was cool. OOOWWWWWww I can just imagine what's going to happen now. Your story is making me just a bit more geeful since that 'incident'. I need your writing to brighten my day. MY COMPUTER IS S@%#!!!!
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April 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic chapter! I can see why you cried writing it. I got all choked up reading it. I think that anyone who's been in a bad relationship (ie; been cheated on) will be affected by this. God knows I was!
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't had a chance to review until now hon. What an intriguing tale you weave. This is like nighttime soap-opera yugioh yaoi style. I so admire the way you can flesh out all the different characters and delve into the background you created for them. I just wish Kaiba wasn't so much of an asshole in your story. ;_; You know I'm a huge sap, especially for that pair. But I love the way this is shaping up. Great storytelling as always my dear.
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April 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
so sad!! evil duke.i loved this chapter! i love angst and drama!!! oh let me guess!! after joey gets happy with tristan duke will come into the picture again or something
or!! the brown hairs on the pillow was tristan or something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dont know
i usually hate tristan/jou fics but i like this one.....please update or i will die
or!! the brown hairs on the pillow was tristan or something!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i dont know
i usually hate tristan/jou fics but i like this one.....please update or i will die
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April 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh gods, u actually put ME in ur a/n *criez and bowz to wonderful amazing writer that iz shakster* And i will say this as many times as i have to, YOUR STORY RULEZ! it is absolute magic on a computer screen. joey and tristan's first date waz so incredibly cute that i just wanted to cry! and the dance/"sex" at the nightclub waz too hot. i luv that song too! and i think it waz so cool how u didn't make them do it on the first date. and that part about falling hard and fast for a guy soundz a LOT like what happened with me and my b/f. hmm...hard and fast...oh, uh, there goez my mind to other "thoughtz" again, don't mind me...^_^ but really, u r a totally great writer, keep up the good work! (though u seem to manage that without my encouragement, but there it iz anywayz!)
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April 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sorry took so long to read this, been busy. It was great Babe! Yugi is so sweet and cute in this *L* I wonder what will happen with Honda and Joey.
Guess I'll have to see.
Guess I'll have to see.
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
excellent!! well done!! i just love it!! : ) ... i hope you update soon cuz i cant wait to read the next chappie ... the teaser of the next chappie was kinda confusing, but i cant wait!! :D:D:D:D:D:D grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreaaaat!!
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April 24, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Bad fangirl, BAD! *hits hand* Why is it something so little as remembering a kind review each chapter too much of a task?ove ove many things in this story and if I can remember any of them I'll let you know what they are. *thinks very hard* I liked all of Tristan and Joey's date. The thing I loved most in the chapter is the 'mirror'. Whoa! What a kink Tristan is! I love your stories immensely. If for nothing else you use the most neglected/overlooked hot cheerleader Mr.Taylor. Of course your skill and plot lines have nothing to do with it. *sarcasm* Nothing at all. *cough bull poop! cough* It amazes me how much of greedy review hog you are. ^_^ You basically have a fan base of girls/guys and even knowing that you still disregard your hot lemons. Tsk, tsk, what are we to do with you Mistress Shakirah? (Like the new name? ^_____^) Before I go...
"I was drunk. I thought we ran over a tiny pink elephant… I jumped out to check." -Yami
"I was drunk. I thought we ran over a tiny pink elephant… I jumped out to check." -Yami