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for Beauty

by Shakirah

person leaf zelindor
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awe.....they are really cute.....can't wait for the next chapter though! -smirks- can't wait to see what Yugi does to Yami, and how Seto reacts! -doesn't boucne aroudn because her feet hurt alot from work, but she wants to- ~Leaf~
person Portia
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I must say that you are totally creative. I don't see how you can come up with great chapters so quickly. Keep it up, especially writing about one of my favouite characters (Tristan) and pairings (Joey/Tristan)
person Kendra
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. I don't really have any advice. I just want you to update soon. Please ;)
person Santurion
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that I skipped the whole flashback, b/c I don't like humiliating, not b/c of your writer's skills. They are really awesome! I KNOW that part was good, it's just I like to read only happy stories. I guess I'm living in my little pink world, but I can't help it. Poor Tristan! But look at the bright side, he has Joey now, so it's not *that* bad. Oh, is Tristan going to intoduce Joey his parents sometime in the future? This question just popped in my mind righ now. Well anyway, just so you know, you are the greatest! Or at least one of the greatest!
person DirtyGirl
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hot damn I love you. Yes I say it almost every chapter/story. It's like I only love you for your great skills, but don't feel so bad... I only hug and kiss up to my bro when he does something nice for me or when I want thinthing. ^_^ Trust me, its my brand of love. What to compliment first? Perhaps the funny lines. Ass points works for me. Every girl keeps track I think. First lemon with Seto and Joey... ^_^ So evil yet delicious, like devil food cake. That Tristan x Joey lemon as I said before was awesome, short, but damn was that mirror idea genius. That tease you gave for next chapter is stuck in my mind. It has to be your biggest tease to me yet. Yugi as a slut was always an idea I hoped to explore, but with you doing it makes it like 120x better. Jeez your hot, Acidflower sure knows what she's talking about. *wink*
person Kat
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!! Damned hot lemon! I loved it. I really like the interaction between those two! I'm serious, you've made Tristan a great guy! I don't know how you did it.... Good lord, I about died with the "shortcomings" and "ass points" comments. Crikeys, I'm at work.... I so can't be explaining that to everyone here! *EG* Can't wait for the angst though. Especially when Seto sees Yami and Yugi (I love Yugi in this, he's sooo much fun!).
person Kat
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow!!! Damn hot lemon! I loved it. I really like the interactiotweetween those two! I'm serious, you've made Tristan a great guy! I don't know how you did it.... Good lord, I about died with the "shortcomings" and "ass points" comments. Crikeys, I'm at work.... I so can't be explaining that to everyone here! *EG* Can't wait for the angst though. Especially when Seto sees Yami and Yugi (I love Yugi in this, he's sooo much fun!).
person AlesserBeing
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh Gods, i can't wait 'til next chapter *snickers*
aww..the 'Beauty' drawing was soo sweet and kawaii~ lol..i actually 'awwed' what the hell are ya doin to me Shakster?? *shakes head*
kinda creepy though..i hate when ppl watch me sleep..my cousin does it all the time when he visits and says i'm interesting when i asleep
*tsk tsk* Then i hafta yell at him for being a stalker and slap him w/ my toothbrush ::sigh::
ah well! Thanxies for the excellent chappie Shakie! ::giggles::
Ja ne!
~Alesser*Being~
person ohh
schedule May 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ohhh this is so so so so so so so so so so soso gso good!!!!!!!!!!!! please hurry and continue!!! hurry up and update!!! this is sooo good!!!!!!!!!!
person REneE
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Chapters four and fiver were completely awesome. ^^ I hope to see more soon. You are a very, very, VERY well written author.