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by Shakirah

person kenshinluver
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
just read chpt. 8...luv how the story is developing into an intresting continuing saga...
can't wait 4 next chapter...
person Kat
schedule May 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, great chapter! Lemon was fantastic (ie; I sat here and said "Oh my god, oh my god, oh my god" and then turned on the air con)! I really loved the interaction between Bakura (he's such a sweetie, but still Mr. Tough Shit - love it) and Yugi at the end.eat eat job, as usual! Whoa, that teaser at the end.... I can't wait to read that chapter.

KB
person Kat
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo great chapter to come back to (computer problems)!!! , I , I think Bakura's crushing more that just a little on Yugi! They do make a good couple too! (wonders of wonders, I actually said that). I got all choked up when Yugi fell apart. He's just a fragile thing. Ohhhhh, my boyfriend and I agree that this is one of the best lines either one of us has ever heard: "But we can’t all land on our backs more often than a luge competitor." It sent him into hysterics. I thank you for that.
person leaf zelindor
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i'm not sure who's worse either! -lol- poor Yugi -cuddles him- more soon plz ^_^ -stretches- ~Leaf~
person Terra
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent job on this story. So well written and has every emotion you can think of. Next time Yugi shakes his little rear, I wanna watch!! Continue on!!
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule May 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I tried 3 times yesterday to leave a review and aff.net wouldn't let it go through. *kicks aff.net* Such a well-written, angst filled chapter. Poor little Yuugi. So tragic that he can't get over Yami. Bakura is good for him, I hope Yuugi will let him in completely. What a dance, whew. I do so wish Kaiba wasn't such a prick in this story. I'm hoping of course you will have him see the errorhis his ways and be completely happy with Yami. I can't help it, they're my most beloved pairing as you well know. I love the way Tristan is so supportive of Jou. They really do make a hot and solid coupling. Wonderful, wonderful work as always. I look forward to your next installments and future stories.

take care hon--

cve
person Akuchan
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. I really feel bad for Yugi, here's hoping that Bakura makes him feel betterl. I like the two of them paired up.
Akuchan
person kkk
schedule May 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!! this is so so so so so so so so so good!! i hope jou tells yami about what happened between him and seto so yami calls it off..goes with yugi..i love seto/jou..even if seto is evil and abuses jou...but i like this fic!! damn! i have stage crew 4 my play..i gete eve everynite at 9 and i enjoy to see another chapter updated soon!!!
person Renee the Rabid Squirrel
schedule May 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Amazing chapter 6! I particularly enjoyed those lemons and all, and I await the next chapter with anticipation. Oh yeah, Yami's gonna be PWNED by Yugi! XD
person blackwidow10
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
hey shaks! so! so sry i haven't review in so long!! *begz forgiveness* my stupid computer waz being stubborn. but enough about that, ur chapterz, az alwayz, were amazing!! ^_^ Tristan iz such a sweetheart!! and he iz definitely packin! ^_^ i can't wait to find out why yugi iz on top of yami in ur next chapter! talk about a teaser! oh, and i thought u might like to know, i've got my b/f hooked on this story too, though he swearz that he doesn't like yaoi. he'z not a very good liar! now, get back to writin this story so i can worship u more! ^_^