rate_review Reviews

Hey there!

I finally managed to read up to the 9th part and WOW I can't wait to read on! Bakura is sooo lovely! Although I can't get enough of him being egocentric and meand and everything I love to see him caring for Yugi, it's cute.
Oh, and there's a main couple, too. ^^;; Tristan seems to be the perfect boyfriend - doesn't he have any weak spots or dark secrets? *courious*

Okay, so update soon, pretty please?

Ciao!
Horizont

awe..Yugi and Bakura are cute...Yami...is..well..somewhat of an ass..And Jou and Tris..awe..XD i love this fic ^_^ ~Leaf~

*hugs* Oh gods, I am so glad you are okay after that accident!!! My stomach acted like your engine, dropped right out when I read that. Thank you for wearing your seat belt (I'm willing to bet you've just gotten at least one other person to start doing that) and may the bruises and soreness go away soon.

Now, on with the review! *G*
Am I the only one who thinks that Yami needs to use Seto's money to fucking buy a clue?!? *laughs* Ooo Tristan and Joey's conversation in the library. Love it! The Yugi and Bakura flashback... I just about fell over howling at the Pablo Personality comment. *snickers* "I didn't come here to chat." Goood, fucking funny.... *gasps* Oh shiiit, Bakura actually yelled Ryou's name?!?! Ooooo, big slip there Big Boy. *squeals* Awwww 'Kura and Yugi are just sooo cute together! You are the only author that makes them look good together too!

*starts reading the scene where Joey confesses to Tristan about Seto and grabs the kleenex* Ohhh Tristan doesn't hate him? *sniffles* That's so sweeeet. I really love how you write Joey's switches between strength and vulnerability. He's such a great character in this story. *swats author gently - musn't make the bruises worse* I still can't believe you actually have made Tristan soo damned lovable! *jaw drops* Whoa... Malik was uke for Tristan? Holy effing caca!!! Damn... Ryou's really fubar'd, ain't he??

Ooooo teaser for the next chapter sounds good!! *snickers* What do you mean "things are about to get good"? They already are!! However, promise duely noted. *G* Glad you're safe.

Keep those chapters coming. I am enjoying this story very much.

See? See how many people love you? (Even though its only for your stories... hmmm thinking of it that way seems horrible. Don't I know how to ruin a good thing?) I know what you mean about the family stuff. In like two weeks I'm moving away from mine. I'm a little scared and I know I'm going to miss them... okay I'm really scared, I'm only 18! It's really for the best. But enough of that, story... awesome. If soap operas were like this I'd still watch them. You do awesome honeydew and I love the drama. Man, I use to like goofy fun loving shit and your supplying me angst! I tell you I'm addicted. It's like a drug at this point. Get to writiear,ear, Babyface needs Cum slut to give her a fix. ^_^ P.S. I luv u!

ok, i owe u about three chapters worth of reviews, cause my computer is a piece of crap. awesome, awesome, awesomeness. i couldn't get over yugi's b-day present to yami! LOL!! that waz so funny!! on the other hand, seto iz a jerk!!! poor joey. but it's kool that he finally got to tell someone about that. joey and tristan make the cutest couple, especially the way u write it! and so do yugi and bakura! keep up the good work, and i gotta go before my computer shuts down again! love ya, u awesome writer u!

And to all my fellow shakster-crazed fanz, we should praise whoever was watching out for her when she was in that car accident, cause if she had been hurt, we wouldn't have the rest of this awesome story to read!!

That was a good way to kill a few minutes waiting on laundry. Yugi is ready to tell Yami to take a hike. Bakura is willing to wait. Tris loves Joey and proved it by not jumping on him for the Kaiba thing. Needless to say I'd love an update in like 20 secs. Too much, huh?

Glad to hear you are doing well from the accident. But the sore part is the worst. I lived on pain meds after mine, at least for a couple days.

As for your flamer. Give it the attention due it. Print it and and use it to line the cat box or bird cage. See it gets all the consideration it rates that way.

Keep up the good work and update soon.

*sniffles* This chappy made me cry!!! *huggles* Really good work, although it was saddening.

*shakes fist at dog* >.< *shakes fist at tree*
alright..maybe i can't stay mad at the dog..Hope ya feel better ie &ie & thanx for posting this chapter*smiles*
ok..real review now: That. Chappie. Rocked!!O_O [sorry, sugar-high] *aww's* Tris is such a sweetie..damn you for makin me like romantic shit lol j/k..ooh, that next chappie's gonna be a doozy *can't believe she used the word 'doozy'*
O.o;; er, Thanxies in advance! (Whoo hoo! B/Y Lemon!) Ja!^^
~Alesser*Being~
::sob:: My poor Ryou-chan...*sniffle*

ok, i just hafta comment on that flamer..WTF?!! come on! what kind of idiot reads EVERY SINGLE ONE of an author's ficcy's and then rants that they suck? *takes a deep calming breath*
*Ahem* Don't listen to that baka, Shakie..you are one of the best writer's on here (My personal fave thankyouverymuch) & all of your stories are original and unique (not to mention jam-packed with very hot lemons^.~) And omeoomeone doesn't like your lemons, perhaps they SHOULD go to FF.net & stick to PG fics..or at least learn to voice their opinions NICELY & possibly give some CONSTUCTIVE criticism!! sorry..i'm ranting again..anywayz..just wanted to remind you how many fans you have out there and to NEVER doubt your awesome talent! *hmmf!*
..and now i'm getting mushy..dammit..::sigh::
luv ya Shak.!
your fangirl^^, ~Alesser