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by Shakirah

person Scarlet Moonflow
schedule June 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... This story is great. I never really likes Triston/Joey... But now, I kind of do! And you made my Bakura/Yugi obsession rise again! *giggles* I'm an obsessed fan of S/J, but it's good to take a break every once in awhile. ^_^

You know what? This story is reality. All these emotions are so real and so well written up, I feel like I'm there. You know how to do this well. I must say, I'm jealous.

One, you don't has SASS (Short Attention Span Syndrome) and that makes me impossible to continue any story. *giggles* Keep up the story, can't wait for the next chapter! Whee!! *giggles and grins*

Scarlet
person Horizont
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Shakster!

Thanks a lot for your mail! ^_^x I wouldn't dare to miss a new part of one ofr str stories, I'm alwasy looking forward to the next part! What I liked best about this part was Yugi's behaviour towards Joey's ralationship to Tristan - he's so cute and jealous! *hugs Yugi*
You manage to describe his feelings really logically, given the fact that feelings can't be put into words completely neway. He's such a poor little thing, isn't he? ^_^x
But could you please make Bakura a bit more... uhm... well, brutal, careless, whatever, Bakura-like? I mean, since he has feelings for Yugi it's only natural for him to care and to worry, but although Yugi had that two incidents he's not a child (okay, in a way, he is) and he can look after himself. An Bakura should know that Yugi needs his freedom.

I can't wait for the next part! Do you think you could write Possession and Beauty a the same time...?
Ciao-ciao!
Horizont
person Ashla
schedule June 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Funfun fic! ^^ I do feel sorry for Ryou. Doesn't he see he's just being used? Poor lad. Can't wait for more ^^; Email me again? Laters!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~
person Kat
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO *squeals* New chapter! Umm, can we say Yugi's beyond confused about Joey and Tristan?? Can't have it both ways Babe... *G*

*squeals louder* LEMON!! Oh my g. gi. girl, you melted my ice cream! I'm so not kidding! Shiiiit Yugi is a riot in this story! Bakura has so many sweet moments that I barely recognize him. That is until he goes all Grrr and psycho, then I'd recognize his sexy self anywhere!

Ohh, I love the gift Tristan gave Joey. He still managed to keep from being too sappy too. I don't know how ya did that!

Oh lordy a broken Ryou is a very sad and pitiful thing. Malik just gives me the heebie-jeebies! Difficult to do...

Love the teaser!

KB
person Kat
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOOOO *squeals* New chapter! Umm, can we say Yugi's beyond confused about Joey and Tristan?? Can't have it both ways Babe... *G*

*squeals louder* LEMON!! Oh my god... girl, you melted my ice cream! I'm so not kidding! Shiiiit Yugi is a riot in this story! Bakura has so many sweet moments that I barely recognize him. That is until he goes all Grrr and psycho, then I'd recognize his sexy self anywhere!

Ohh, I love the gift Tristan gave Joey. He still managed to keep from being too sappy too. I don't know how ya did that!

Oh lordy a broken Ryou is a very sad and pitiful thing. Malik just gives me the heebie-jeebies! Difficult to do...

Love the teaser!

KB
P.S. I'm glad you're writing two stories.... More for me to read! Yeah, I'm greedy. I admit it!
person Renee
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wowie...awesome chapter once again. It's interesting the way you've portrayed Ryou in this story. I feel sorry for the poor guy. Malik's a creep. Tristan and Joey are so CUTE! ^^ Best wishes for your friend's arm to heal as quick as possible.
person Santurion
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*whines* Why are making Yugi so bad about Joey? Joey has finally found love and everything that goes with it. *sigh* But I guess I have to understand it's part of the story. And poor Ryou. I hope there'll be more happy future for him. Hm, I just understood something. I want you to change that story to more happy one, but you see, it's a bad thing. B/c it's your writing style, and if I can't take a little bit angst, too bad for me. B/c your stor rea really amazing! It's good that you always warn, when there is going to happen something. Thanks!
person Tanya Maxwell
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Girl, you're a genius! I *heart* this ficcie, it's gorgeous. And that Bakura/Yugi scene was absolutely breathtaking! Great job!!

Tanya~
person DirtyD
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that is some shit, as the story goes on it’s getting harand and harder for everyone to walk. (In more ways then one...) I have to tell you, through it all Yugi is by far my favorite character. (With cocky/kinky Tristan in close second.) His sluttly, sexy ways and angst is exciting me beyond comprehension. I hope your satisfied with your smug self smut lord, havehave me squealing like a pig and twice as dirty. I love every second of it too.
person Ashla
schedule May 31, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is a very, VERY good fic! ^^ I love the plot line you have to this, and yeah, yeah, the little firsty moments with the lads are written well too ^^;; Kinda a strange concept, though Yugi would make a cute pimp, heehee. Joey is so sweet! So glad that Trist is being just as nice to him. Seto's a jerk! *Bats him with a mallet* Oh you evil bugger! How could he be so mean to Joey? Taking advantage like that and then going back to Yami is just sick. And to think that there are probably people like that in the world. Scary thought.
Well done! ^^ Read the whole thing in one day coz I couldn't stop once I started, heehee. Nice work and I can't wait to see how all this actually turns out!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~

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