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by Shakirah

person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Hey! AFF finally let me through to review! Poor little Yuugi, still such a messed up tramp. He needs some serious happy pills. And I love the way you have portrayed Tristan's family. His parents seem very accepting. The Michael Jackson kareoke is what kills me. That is SO fucking popular with asians, I should know. Why, I have no clue.

You have set up quite for quite an explosvie fallout for later down the road I see. Just as long as everyone is happy in the end.

Great job again babe, you always manage to turn out an awesome chapter.

much luv-

cve
person Ashla
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Poor Yugi. It can't be easy for him after all that's happened but I really hope he sorts himself out before something bad happens. He's too cute to get hurt more!
Heehee! Poor Tristan ^^ Embarrassing pictures alert! Heehee. Big tough guy's scared of clowns? Poor thing ^^ Lol, his mother is so mean! Cringe! They're a fun family! Heehee! I'd love to visit ^^
It's kinda sweet that Yugi's finally going to try with Bakura. I hope it works ^^
Ohh! Next one sounds like a good one! ^^ Can't wait! Later!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~
person Renee
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle* Angst...

Yay for the Jou visiting Tristan! That was a fun chapter. I'm definitely sticking around...I love angst, even if it makes me bawl like a sissy.
person AlesserBeing
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
::pouts:: why did that chappie seem so short?
*gras sas she remembers the photo album & karaoke scene* Finally Tris is taken down a peg! *throws streamers & confetti* Everyone say 'Hurrah!' for awkward stages!!
...*crickets*...
^^;; ok, maybe i had too many cookie, hehe
er, Thanxies! for the great new chappie ^_^ i just love Tristan's mom lol..she's just too cute
ttfn!
~Alesser
person blackwidow10
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awesomeness as usual! i especially luved the part where joey meets tristan's parents. they are TOO cute! mrs. taylor sounds kinda like my...w...which scares me. anywayz, r u gonna tell us what that other phobia of tristan's is? scared of clowns? and likes michael jackson? poor tristan!
person Kat
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow Yugi, can we say "sex addict"??? Seto needs his ass kicked big time.

*snickers, giggles* Tristan's parents are priceless! *laughs* Clowns! *falls over laughing* Moonwalking?! *wipes tears from eyes* Oh my god! He's actually doing it! Raising the roof... *falls over laughing again* I love Tristan's parents!

“Well, as perfect as a Michael Jackson crushing, clown fearing virgin can be.” *screams, kicks feet and laughs hard enough to wheeze*

Oooo Bakura's got it baaaaaad! He's gone all protective-boyfriend-grrr. Love it, love it, love it!

Uh oh... Joey on the wrong side of Bakura?? Not good, definitely not good.

Hope you had fun at the party!
KB
person Terra
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I can see where Tristan gets a lot of his personality from. His mom sounds so cool. Update soon. Loved it.
person Kaeo Kekai
schedule June 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just finished Chapter 12 and i LOVE Tristan's mom she is great almost like my own mom (I never let my significant other see her because she would do stuff like that). I'm gonna hold you to your promise of happy ending though I couldn't stand to see all of this end somewhat sadly and how it started. Once again your the greatest. Sincerely,
Kaeo Kekai
person Kaeo Kekai
schedule June 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Just got done with Chapter 6 and God Tristan is such an amazing guy and after what Duke (what an asshole I can't believe what he did to poor Joey) something Joey really needs. I'm kinda dissapointed that Joey didn't fall in love with Mako because Mako/Joey is one of my favorite pairings but I haven't been able to find any storys about them that were more than maybe PG or like TV-Y7 but hey I'll stop ranting and get back to praising. I hope things work out with Joey and Tristan they deserve each other so please let it work out. Your the greatest,
Kaeo Kekai
person Kaeo Kekai
schedule June 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG This story is so great what a tear jerker. Your witing skills are great and your characters are well built and wasy to relate to. I'm a guy by the way and this story had m on the verge of tears on countless occasions within just the first two chapters. To be both blunt and honest I started to read this story as something to get off on but after reading it i was hooked and would have still read all of it without any sex scenes (well maybe one or two). I loced the quote from chapter 2 it was so deep and meaningful thanks for writing something so great i barely want to write this review because i want to finish the story (im only on chap 3) so im gonna cut this short and say this your great the story is to and you are such an awesome writer
Love Your Newest Biggest Fan,
Kaeo Kekai