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for Beauty

by Shakirah

person Ashla
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! ^^ I so adore this fic! It's my fave YGO! fic ^^ That was nice of Bakura to help Yugi like that. Poor little guy is only trying to find his place in life. Like I said before, I love Tristian's parents! They're funny ^^ Heehee, and his mom's so nice too. Good thing they were cau caught on the balcony! I couldn't imagine what poor Emily would have thought if she'd walked out and seen innocent little Joey in that possition, heehee. Tristian knows what he's doing, heehee. I can't wait to see how Yugi and Joey are going to sort everything out. I've a feeling that Joey doesn't want to tell Yugi about why he slept with Kaiba. I wouldn't really want to tell either, but maybe I would if I was afraid of losing a friend. I can't wait for the next part! Again, thanks for e-mailing me when you update ^^ Love this!
Slán slán!
~Ashla~
person Portia
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The interaction between Tristan and Joey is the bomb. They are sooo cute together. I never want this story to end. Keep up the great writing.
person Horizont
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi Shakster!

Honestly, you've been lea us us with questions for several parts of that story now! Please please please, while creating sooo many other questions and riddles for us readers, can't answer some of the old ones? *puppydogeyes*
When's Tristan going to bottom to Joey? Will he at all?
Who did Duke sleep with while being with Joey?
That buisness man Tristan was talking about is Kaiba, right? (okay, this isn't exactly a question)
What is Tristan afraid of except for clowns? (I heard many children are afraid of them btw)
And how's that whole thing going to have a happy ending?

Well, what should I say? You write beautiully, but that goes for any part of all your stories. I love reading your fanfics. So, while I really want to know the end of this - can't you let it last for ever?

Yours
Horizont
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
The drama! The angst! The sex!

This is obviously one amazing great story. ^^ Off to read Possession's update!! ^^
person Kat
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
He had to have his doctorate in Fuckology
*falls over laughing* no shit Sherlock! Damn!!! How in the hell did you manage to make Tristan so effing sexy and hot? Christ on a crutch Shakster, Joey's not the only one you make so totally fuckable! (you remember that I actually can't stand the guy, right?!)

Wow... Bakura's amazing! *wipes drool off chin, shirt, keyboard...* yeah, amazing is the best my mind can come up with. It kinda flat-lined. *G*

Damn, yes indeed, a very long chapter, but sooooo fricken worth it! *reads teaser for next chapter* Oooo Malik.. this can't be good. *EG* Can't wait!

KB
person blackwidow10
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i luved this chapter! well, i luved all of them, but still. i luved how u described yugi's feelings when he was with bakura. and sex on the balcony! that was priceless! but u still havent told us what else tristan is afraid of. next trip to the parent's house maybe? anyway, awesome job, as usual, keep up the good work and update soon!
person Scarlet Moonflow
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOH!! Wow! I loved this chapter - then again, don't I love every chapter? *shrugs* Ooh, well!

I can't believe Joey got that angry! I was wodnering if he was going to hit him... I can't wait for the angst, I just hope I don't get too teary-eyed and ball.... *laughs* Wish I could write angst good! ^^

Scarlet Moonflow
person DirtyD
schedule June 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I just know some shit is going to go down with Malik, every reader should know, what I'm wondering is are you going to have Yugi raped? Tortured? Have you been talking to Acid alot in my absence? Why does that sound strange the way I phrased it? Why am I asking 21 questions? Well awesome lemon, naughty naughty Tristy. I absolutly love him in this fic. Fantastical. Man this is shaping up to be you best story yet! Bravo!



Forever your #1 Fangirl Momma Cat (I did it first bitches!)
person Scarlet Moonflow
schedule June 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oooh! I loved this chapter, funny! *giggles* Can't wait for next chapter, and I love angst, though I always hate it when I'm reading it, but I keep reading it over and over, and it keeps making me cry. I'm wierd. ^^;;;; Can't wait!!
person Horizont
schedule June 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi! ^_^x

Wohooo, Tristan's pas res really are cool... like a model fpr all embrassing parents. ^^;; But it's the first time Tristan brought someone home so... I wonder how my mom will react. *g*
I can't wait for the scene where Joey tells Yugi about him and Kaiba. Well of course Yugi more or less knows already, but he doesn't know for sure.
And Tristan wnats to kill Yugi with kindness, huh? *laughs* I'd like to see him try! ^.^x
Bakura is a bit nice, but I guess it's okay.

Please please update soon! ^^x

Ciao-ciao!
Horizont

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