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by Shakirah

person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule July 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow that was intense. So sad and gut-wrenching. No one deserves to get raped, not even someone promiscuous. Even though you already told me about it previously it is still hard to read. Poor little Yuugi. The pivotal turning point. But I know the story can only go uphill from here.

Great chapter, great story, great Yugioh Yaoi soap opera drama you have created. Kudos to you babe--

much love--

cve
person Ashla
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
............................. *Blinks and wipes eyes.* Poor Yugi! I didn't think Malik would do that! CREEP! I hate people like that! And the sad thing is that there are people like that in the world. They are sad, sad people. Man! You gave me a fright when you had Yugi take out the blade in the bathroom! I thought Joey was going to find him like he did the last time. *Shivers.* Thank goodness he didn't go through with it! Love this story! I can't wait to get home to read more! See you next time! Later!
slá slán!
~Ashla~
person blackwidow10
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh gods...*sniffs and pulls out another tissue* poor yugi!! can i kill malik? and ryou? even just in my imagination? oh please tell me there's not gonna be another terribly depressing chapter in this story...im focusing on that happy ending u mentioned. ur writing is awesome, as usual, and u described things very well. i dont think i could have written a scene like that.
person Horizont
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hi.

Poor Yugi... this is so... well, you get to read a lot of rape fics these days, so one should say you get used to it, but... this was so real. A friend of mine told me of a similar thing quite a while ago and I just didn't know what to say. Only thing I could do was hold her hand and listen.
So will Yugi be all right? Will anything be allright again? And what about Bakura? He's not going to let Yugi down, is he?
So... that keeps me from writing much. There's nothing to be said about something that terrible. Joey's right, nobody deserves that.

Thanks for writing such a wonderful story for us readers!
Horizont
person Renee
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*BAWLING*

Poor, poor Yugi! Poor Joey! It was so sad!!!

Me and my angst-loving issues... XD
person Kaeo Kekai
schedule June 30, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awesomely Sad Chapter. This ch was so love hate for me the writing was awesome and loved that but the whole thing was sad which i hate. but as always this chapter was great! I've had this on my mind so much i had a really weird dream guest staring Tristan whom i made a bet with and had to bottom for him but damn even in MY dreams hes a top (u got to write him bottoming soon) worst part was that my dog woke me up before the good parts. oh well maybe it will conclude tonight. but anyway love the writing keep it up. cant wait till next update. C-YA,
Kaeo Kekai
person Kat
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh gods... The warnings did help, some. Still this was hard to read. I can't imagine what it was like to write! It's so difficult to know what to say. It's such a harsh chapter, but you did so good with it (conveying the horror without grusome detail - thank you, I 't n't need reminders). Don't worry, I'll stick around for that happy ending. I know this Yugi will be a survivor. I'm glad to see Tristan stepping in to help too. Will Bakura be around though or is it really over between them?

Now, I gotta go cheer myself up.

KB
person DirtyD
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I tell you, the worst for me was the morning after. Yugi being ignored, just sitting there and negected. Wow this is some heavy stuff. I had other things to say but I decided not.
person dragonkitty
schedule June 29, 2004 at 12:00 AM
....................*tears silently falling* That was so sad. At first it was kinda funny cause Ryou is crazy, but then I'm like
"No, stop, RUN!" that didn't happen. Yugi needs a hug. A really really big hug. And what was going on with him; his inner
tormoil (can't spell) That was so sad. I'm glad that Joey and Yugi have reconsiled though. Good chapter. ;__;
person Kaeo Kekai
schedule June 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey Big FAn dont want to sound like im complaining but when will Joey get to top with Tristan and when will we learnn Tris's 2nd phobia? oh yeainceince that was brilliant to bad we didnt get to see or read about that show i can so see tristan in ass-less spandex that would have been great but prolly wouldve had to be a private show for Joey but hey great so far your the best,
Kaeo Kekai

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