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by Shakirah

person cve
schedule July 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM

Ah the aftermath. Poor little Yuugi, what a complete mess he is. What *have* you done to him. I liked Tristan's conversation with Yuugi, how he was able to open up to him and reach Yuugi a bit. Tristan, the knight in shining armor for both Jou and Yuugi. And Bakura, I know he will be back in the picture very soon. And hey, bring back Seto and Yami soon. Never mind, I know they won't resurface for a while...

And NO it's not too short. You have a strange perception of a short chapter.

great as always--

much love--


cve
person Kat
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Two great things today! AFF.net is back and you've updated! Fantastic chapter. I'm so glad that Tristan was able to help and that he and Yugi seemed to have buried the hatchet. I remember that book you mentioned. It is a good book.

You're doing a fantastic job on this story. As emotionally wrenching as it can be at times, I love every word of it. Although, I'm hoping Bakura shows up to kick some Malik ass!! *EG*

KB
person Horizont
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey there Shakster!

I hope you allergy got better by the time (I have it, too, and I#m doing a terrible test at the moment... >_Well, neway, this is a wonderful new chapter, really is (although I'd like to see Bakura again ^^x). Tristan seems to be the perfect man, right? I mean okay, he does fear clowns and spiders and he did have that crisis - but while just that seems to be inperfect it's what makes him so perfect. He's great. Joey really is lucky to have him.

Um, yeah, looking forward to the next chapter! ^_^x
Ciao-ciao!
Horizont
person Horizont
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hey, they cut my review! Well, I was telling you how much I liked the chapter and how perfect Tristan was and they erased the whole text! That's so frustrating... but please update soon nevertheless! ^^x I just can't get myselftypetype the whole thingy again... *curse*

Horizont *kicks her computer*
person diablo
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
BABE!!!! hehehe, finally, i can review... oh my good lord... are you trying to kill me with these chapters? have i really been that naughty... MORE!! MORE I WANT MORE MORE NOW!! *pulls out whip* the drama/angst holy shoot ... geeze babe, i must of been naughty, if its not your lemons, its everything else... BAKURA!!!! WAAAA MOREEEEEEE

luv ya! more more more!!

-diablo
person DirtyD
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Okay fifthy reviews later and you still want more? I can't handle giving you anymore! Okay, I'll try. My gawd, this is a crazy f'in chapter. (Yeah like it wasn't one chapter ago.) I just can't wait to see how Bakura takes the news, and what of Yami? A'hole Seto probably won't care. (Or you do tend to throw us for a loop with him.) Get to wrg thg this is some shit you've written. GAWD! I hate your talent! (Okay, I love/hate it.) And sorry for not im you lately, but then again, you've probably been busy, little bed hopper you. ;p
person Kaeo Kekai
schedule July 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was worth the wait. Awesome Chapter the insight that you had and the research that you did made even better and i think we all appreciate all the work you put into this story. Can't wait to the next chapter.
Kaeo Kekai
person blackwidow10
schedule July 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
oh no...it sounds like joey is gonna screw up royaly next chapter...but i'm glad that tristan is helping yugi! i laughed when i read the a/n and u said that he had more issues than a magazine, though it is true. good chapter, im happy that the story isnt going to get anymore depressing. but why did tristan have to be afraid of spiders? spiders r kool! (i probably sound crazy, but anywayz...) awesomeness and keep up the good work, update soon! i wanna see yugi feeling better!
person Scarlet Moonflow
schedule July 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ARG!! YOu evil evil girl! You didn't e-mail me, so I thought that you didn't update! Theacciaccidently clicked the link to the story on ym Favorties list, and found out you updated!! EVIL!!

^^ Anyways, good, sad chapter. Though I didn't cry, maybe it's because I cried enough on the other sts I s I read. Man, I read ansgty too much, it's sad!

I can't wait until you update, ooh, I can't wait for the happy ending!
person leaf zelindor
schedule July 2, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i know i havent' reviewd the last several chaps but omg! -glomps- that was such a good chapter! sad and moving and i couldn't stop reading! (which is a big deal because i need to go to bed, have work tomorrow -lol-) anyway! good chap! can't wait for more! ~Leaf~