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for Beauty

by Shakirah

schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm impressed with our story and I think it's very good, and the rest is not neccesarily a negative comment on you, it's simply that I'm not really the soap-opera-type, and I find them all to be ridiculous drama-queens. And, really, OMG. Fucking drama-queens, ALL of them. Except Bakura, which might be why I like him the most in this story. Joey drives me up the wall, flipping out about everything, he really needs to calm the fuck down, I don't really think that I would be as patient with him as Tristan is. Yugi provoked me to no end before his rape, I wanted to smack him really bad XD. And Yami and Seto I just don't like, short story.. But hey, sometimes it's good to read a story that you don't neccesarily like or agree with the character's decisions, it's good to be provoked and presented with the other side. And the story is well-thought and well-written, if you discount the occasional repetition of words and stuff. It is a really good story, I'm just a very different type of person ^^ .
person Olivia
schedule November 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Let them keep on "coming!"
person pokers
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::poke:: ever updating? TT
person Oh the Possibilities
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. It's great! Please write another chapter I'm dying here!
person *-*
schedule October 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good fic, I loved reading it and I hope to read what happens soon *-* are you going to update?
person Havoc Tellanoi
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This has to be the most amazing story i have ever read. it grabs your attention, amkes you feel what the characters are feleing, shows you their pain and then when you don't think your heartstrings can be pulled anymroe, it gives you hope and joy and love and then it comes back form elft field with a new sucker punch. It realy is a beautiful work and i can't wait for it to be a finished work. Do keep up the good work.
person Zena
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So gooooood!! This one was a long one as well, but I loved every minute of it!!! You're one of my favs on this site! Keep it up!!!
person Zena
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hee, hee, I just have to say it: You're one of the best when it comes to discribing sex scenes in your fics!!!! OMG!! They are so loooong and yummy...I just LURV it!! Most authors quickly describe just a bit or just not enough, and most don't include sounds effects of oooohs and ahhhhhs, which adds A LOT to a sex scene!!!! I've read Possession, Rivals with Benefits, Enslavement, Lust, Longing and a Videotape, Overexposed, along with this one, Beauty, and I just LOVE them ALL to DEATH!!!! I can't get enough of your sex scenes!! I read them over and over!!! Yeah, I'm weird, I'm sorry...but I just must GUSH!!! You're a great writer and I hope you'll continue making such juicy fics for us all! I thank you sooo much for all the fics you've made!!! Keep up the great work! Gonna keep an eye on you, for more fics!!! Lotsa love!!
person nancy
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniff* it's been so long since your last update! Your story is my favorite on aff, so i hope it's no discontinued...(i love it so much!!!!^^')
person Cinder
schedule May 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is so indescribably fantastic, but I do believe my head will explode if we don't get an update!