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for One minute ho'

by Fel5

person Midnight Hope and Ivana-san
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Midnight: *snickers* break me off show me what you got cuz' I don't a one min. man

Ivan: she's a dumb ass. I luv this but i couldn't help sing that tune when I was reading this

Midnight: LOVE IT!
person j.s.
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol
joey is sooo hott
nice story, nicer ending ;)
will u b doing a sequel?
person MAggieMay
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
ha ha ha...omg...lololol
person Li
schedule October 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
O.o That was different. I liked it though ^-^ It does have true potential to become more, but it's also good the way it left off. It would make a really interesting story non-the-less though (hint hint nudge nudge)

~♥~ Li
person aniron legolas
schedule April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please write a sequel. This reminded me of the " Minute Man" song by Missy Elliot, Ludacris and Trina(?). Damn, that was short but really hot!!!
person Kat
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
(trying again because SQL server error)...

Damn, this was goooood!! Who would have thought that being referred to as a "One Minute Man" would be a good thing for a guy? *cackles* Way to cause major distractions in a conversation.
person alostblackcat
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SO AWESOME

you are such a great writer!

i'm jealous..

T_T