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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A good short explaination chappie, very too the point and nicely carried off. (go Shizuka-chan!)
Lol...the 8 out of 10 squicks that the first chappie received was mainly due to the imagry of the infant's head. A fairly ghastly thought that upped the squick level by five points all on it's own.
Keep it up and I'm looking forward to more.
~Ryanookami
Lol...the 8 out of 10 squicks that the first chappie received was mainly due to the imagry of the infant's head. A fairly ghastly thought that upped the squick level by five points all on it's own.
Keep it up and I'm looking forward to more.
~Ryanookami
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ooh, wow. This is a really great plot, you know. I've never heard of anything like it and its so unique and and and...*rambles on*
I am just literally dying to see a new chapter come out. All I want is a new chapter because your story is the best. ^^ I hope I see one up later? ^^
I am just literally dying to see a new chapter come out. All I want is a new chapter because your story is the best. ^^ I hope I see one up later? ^^
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn, Damn, Damn!! Love it, oh man the gore, and so original!!
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April 14, 2004 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHH!!! DAMN!!!!! such a good little fic!!! oh god PLEASE say you are continuing this!!!! *jumps around insanly* WOW such an original idea!!!! damn.... hey you wanna know something totally sick? I read all 3 chapters (blood and gore included) while eating a sandwich!!! Mmmmm.... yummy gore >:) gave me a wonderfully bubbly feeling in my stomach ^^ loved it ^^ you are skilled to show such morbid mental images ^_^ when i read that kaiba was going to take care of Jou i was like "OOOOOO!!!! EVIL!!!" and then someone asked what the hell i was freaking out about :P LOL OMFG this is SO going on my Recomended Reading RIGHT NOW!!! OH PLEASE CONTINUE SOON!!!! I wanna see how twisted and evil you make Seto.... hopefully very evil *grin*
~Anvanimaserke
~Anvanimaserke
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMFR h-how how could..i have no ide what to say..but poor poppy. by the way is this a setoxjoey fic i really hope so..and anyways to me its starting to look that wat or it could be that sense im so inlove with tthat couple that i pick it up everytime i read a fic. well anyways ja ne and please update reall soon i wanna see what happends to joey
candycane
candycane
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, you wanted to write a dark and twisted fic...I think you got your wish. I have to say I'm hooked, update soon!
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I'm glad I read this before work. *cackles* This ought to make work interesting! (I'm so glad I don't work at the piercing place down the street) Now, sick humor aside. Poor Jou! Gods, to have to endure that... I'd check out too.
Oh yeah... Uh oh. *winks*
Oh yeah... Uh oh. *winks*
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*shivers*
the gore was alot more... gorier
but still
seto's taking in jou!!!
=^-^=
please update soon!
the gore was alot more... gorier
but still
seto's taking in jou!!!
=^-^=
please update soon!
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April 13, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This is great!
Kaiba has a crush!
Kaiba has a crush, it's so cute.
Anyway update soon.
^_^
Kaiba has a crush!
Kaiba has a crush, it's so cute.
Anyway update soon.
^_^
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April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is great. I mean, sure one of my fav characters is idistdistressed mental state, but other than that the sheer drama is wonderful. Update soon. ^_^