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Mmmmm. An insane Jou finally getting his revenge. =8-0 Bwhahaha

The fluffies are making for a good, effective contrast. They make the revenge seem to be all the more horrible and prolonged...

Whoa... wow! Damned good chapters! Shiiiiit, Jou getting even is a scary thing indeed. In trouble for killing Yugi and Yami? Umm probably, but you're doing a good job of writing it. *smirk*

I still love the story and I'm glad you're back to updating it!

Can't wait to see what's next.

Kat

Wow I had never thought that Seto could be that evil $10 says it was the same mugger who did I Tea (sorry I have only seen the english version) but Yugi will clear Honda won't he?? Great fic please keep it up

At first this story was fantastic. Fast moving, tight and well written. Now it seems like you're just drawing it out to keep it going instead of giving it the hard hitting impact it should have had when Yami found out about what Kaiba was doing. IMHO Yami would NEVER give anyone a second chance under those circimstances. He would have blown SEto into the Shadow Realm then deal with the fallout from it afterwards.

You still would have had a good story if you would have punished Seto in that chapter. You still have to get Joey better, let eveyone react to the circimstances and then deal with the fall out of Seto's soul being sent to the shadow realm.

As I stated before, just the opinion of another writer.

This is a great chapter! Poor Yugi! You had poor yugi beaten nearly to death! How could you!! Anyway please hurry with the next chapter! Don't let poor yugi die! Please!! :)

This is a great chapter! I hope he gets sent to the shadow realm! Please hurry with the next chapter!! :)

WOOHOO!!! A new chapter! oooo yes!! More violence! Loved the ice cream story, although I'm not sure I wanna know how Mokuba ended up with ice cream down his own pants. *G*

Pleeeeeeeeeeeeease, save us from the evil cliffhanger! *bounces up and down* I want more!!

KB

*imitates the kids* Oooo BUSTED! Seto is sooo in for it now! *grinslly*lly* I can't wait! Uhh... gee that sucks about Anzu (sorry, best I can do with the sympathy - I clapped when I read the "never gonna talk again" part). I want to know what he saw about Honda too!

Hope the muses come back soon and thanks for the update!!

KB

Interesting forshadowing --> careful to Honda and stay back to Yami. Why stay back? Will Jou be handling this on his own....

that was the sickst thing i ever read i don't ever flam anyone being a fan fic wirrter my slfe but this story is gross i mean ya Seto's a ass at times but damn you made him a fricking nuts case man i mean the whole thing with joey and train crsuse was good i mean it's good drama but all that other shit about the guy being muderd and tea being raped and her arm being cut off the nipple being cut off and voice being takeing for ever that was just too much i mean eww and Joey being raped Seto would never do that other wise the story was good