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for Puppet Love

by Fel5

person sweetflowerli
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a amzing story. Maybe you could do the wedding as another story. (I like to thorw ideas out so don't be mad) complete with people relizing it's jou, him ending up in jail, a mwistwist of Honda figureing out more then what we did in this story, and more gore. Oh and when I say it was disturbing that was in a nice way. its hard to write something disturbing. Peace out.
person Reviewer #34321
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
LOVELY! JUST LOVELY! Nice job! :) GO JOU!

Keep on Writin'
Reviewer #34321
person Angel-Belle
schedule August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I guess this means that they will finally be reunited with Jou...I hope so!
person Satanic Mechanic
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah…this fic gives me the shivers. A job well done! So…do you have any plans for another twisted piece of work for us?
person Kat
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Love it! Great finish. Now, I can't wait to see what you cook up next! This was just an amazing ride! *EG* Is this where we all start chanting "more, more, more"?

Fantastic work! Pat yourself on the back for it.

Kat
person Alaskantiger
schedule August 20, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This was a great story! Thank you for sharing it! :)
person Angel-Belle
schedule August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh God. I just discovered this story and read it all in one shot. It was very well written...very sad and VERY gory!! Wow...it was really different.
person aspiker
schedule August 18, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's been a great pleasure to read this story! Love all those switches. 8-)
person Reviewer #34321
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff! Really enjoyed reading this story! PLEASE write an epilouge! :) Pretty Please?!

Keep on Writin'
Reviewer #34321
person Satanic anicanic
schedule August 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I am such a bad reviewer. I’ve read every chapter and yet I haven’t reviewed every chapter.

You defiantly get the reward for the most fucked up seto jou relationship ever. If you can call it that. Imean, it’s obvious that they both, even Jou, have some twisted feelings for etherther.

Damn the last chapter was the most gory piece of….good job! He got what he deserved.

Ah…I’m going to miss this fic. You should really write an epilog. Pweeeese?