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for Puppet Love

by Fel5

person Kat
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you continue this. Dark yes, but terribly compelling. I want to see where you go with this.
person padg
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well you sure have our interest with this first chapter. Am looking forward to where you go with it. Good writing.
person alostblackcat
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwwww

poor poor jou jou........

T_T

all of your fics are wonderful and i have no doubt in this one

please update soon
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YEAH YOU GO! I don't think you're sick at all I think this fucking rules so far! Update soon, I like to see how dark and twisted you're going to make this!
person Kat
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good second chapter. Jou in a catatonic state is a strange thing to behold. Damn, Shizuka got a hell of a backbone! *smirk* Not that he didn't deserved getting himself smacked upside the head. Given the descriptions in the first chapter, I kinda figured the carnage was what had caused the catatonic state... Never even imagined that amount of time passing though. Shiiiit! I'll try and be patient while waiting for the next chapter... honest.
person alostblackcat
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor poor jou

why don't they ever pick on seto!??!?

T_T

oh well..

please update soon!
person Black-butterfly
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So...dark...So..disturbing...I love it. It's great. I'm in awe, Actually trembling with fear..That has to be one of the most grousome things that i've ever read. No, THE most grousome thing i've ever read. Please continue..*Black-Butterfly will now assume fetal position and slowly rock back and forth* Find a happy place..Find a happy place...
person Ryanookami
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm feeling a strange mixture of being creeped out and really curious. Your warning of a fic that promises to be super disturbing is just too alluring to pass up. So I guess it's with an evil sense of foreboding that I hope you update soon. Maybe I'm a sucker for torture, but I'm looking forward to being creeped out more, just to see what will happen. You've written a good premise so far and I cant wait to dig into the actual body of work.
By the way, so far you get t oft of 10 squicks, mostly for beheadings and maimings during the first chapter, which is a pretty good score so early out. Keep it up!
~Ryanookami
person Jenniyah
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow...what happened to that train?? soo...bloody!! yeah!!!!
what's the pairings??
person Saelbu
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
This sounds really interesting, update soon. ^_^