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by KatlinAmanda

person Guest
schedule December 18, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Please continue 

schedule March 1, 2012 at 12:00 AM
its a really good story, I wish you would write more. I would love to see what happens.
schedule March 30, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Great story! Please keep writing it!!
person Sam
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good story but you need to add more chapters
person tigerwitch
schedule September 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
poor poor yugi noa is sooooooo mean but what is noa devapling a crush of his own? dos noa really like yugi??????? or is it just lust YOU MUST UPDATE AND TELL ME!!!!!
but ya anyway
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Arainaina
schedule April 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw man this was getting good will seto save yugi or will noa forever keep them please update soon I want to know more please
person Troubled_Maker_08
schedule April 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That nasty little asshole!!!!
He is taking everything that Seto loves.
Maybe he just wants Seto to come to him.
That would be a good reason to take all that Seto loves.
Well enough babbling.
I love the story update soon.
Lata
person Anon
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I like the plot idea you have behind your story but unless it is supposed to be a one-shot, i think you should take things a little slower between Seto and Yugi (though i absolutly love the two together) maybe you should allow them some alone time to get to know one another before having them confess their feelings. otherwise i think that this is going to be good, please continue.
person hee-chan2
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM

I love it


please continue