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by sakata

schedule September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. I am quite enjoying this. I like how you've gone really in depth with the battles and that they make sense, and I like how Jou and Seto's relationship is unfolding. ^_^
person Santurion
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Cute when pouts? Hehehe! And we all know how is Seto feeling at that moment! And the battle, I liked it, but since I don't know how to play, can't comment. :P I would like to say something more about what Seto felt when Joey fell, but I don't know how to put those thoughts in the words. Sorry! :( Great work as always!!! ^-^
person Saelbu
schedule May 15, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter, update soon. ^_~
person DBZVelena
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hope you'll write more soon.
I love the way you incorporated the cards in to your story.
Its very well done!
person Aloe
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story-- can't wait to see where you go with it.

-L
person Ishshi
schedule May 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
So. Good. *_____*

I can't wait to read your next chapters. Finally, some decent S/J! ^__^
person Santurion
schedule April 17, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That was one helluva interesting confersation! (Sorry for cursing!) This is really great story! And I hope you update sooner than second chapter! :)
person alostblackcat
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
o0o

this fic sounds so awesome!!

please update soon!
person Santurion
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, now how do I say it? Oh, I know! BRILLIANT!