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for Cooking Class 101

by darkvixen

person Hiso-chan
schedule June 1, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*gawks* And you haven't placed up an other chapter yet?! What's wrong with you?!!!! Come on, lemon, lemon!
person Ryou\'s Teady Bear
schedule May 23, 2004 at 12:00 AM
wow, i really liked that! n_n wOoT!! lol i told you i'd review this one didn't I? well it took me about an hour and a half to read it all O.o lol i cant wait for you to add another chappy! ^.^ lol well i'll see you later dearest, oh and your story really put me in..a ..err..frisky..mood, so , as you so 'elequently' put it the other night *evil grin* well, you remember, bai bai luv!
person happy yaoi lover
schedule May 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
i would lov to read the next chapie. but i cant you see, cuse it's.not.there.yet! !!!!!!!!!!! @_@ update soon pls
person Deb
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Hehe! Come on! Ryous too feminine and cute NOT to be gay...or even bi at least hehehe!!! ^__^
Excellent chappie!! I cant wait to see what happens next with those two!!
Oh! The cherry bit was hottt!!!
Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
person sweetmisery
schedule May 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwww...
person Deb
schedule May 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Great chappie!! I think Marik or Malik should rescue him hehe...
Please update soonies!! This is gr8!!
Lotsa Luv Debs xxx
person JavaGreen
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Aw, poor Ryou!

As for Bakura I can understand his cooking pains. I tend to poison people when I attempt to cook. It's best for all involved that I stick to take out.
person Eres
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Evil clifhanger!!!! >_< So who is gonna save Ryou? Bakura's friends? Malik? Marik? Aww, u have to continue this soon, it's really good! ^^
person WIEJ!
schedule May 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NOOOO! Do! Don't let Ryou get all beat up and stuff! let me save him *WIEJ! comes to the rescue!*
;P
person AngeLStarFire_Hikarist
schedule May 3, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*snickers* That chapter wreatreat! I especially love the pancakes in the morning... I just want to know how Bakura go them to fall perfectly on the plate like that... O_o;;; Anyway, love it!