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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. it's turning out good. well I gotta keep reading.
Butterfly Beauty
Butterfly Beauty
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What happened to Jou I need to know! he's one of my most favorite characters. is he going to be alright? please update soon I love this story.
Butterfly Beauty
Butterfly Beauty
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November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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February 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was excellent, update soon!
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November 28, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh, dear... your writing is addicting, I tell you. I really, really like this story, I've seen a few other 'Jou with a yami' stories but they're never done well at all -- yours is terrific. I should tell you though, the last few chapters have not only gotten screwed up with your italics (btw, it's italics, not cursive hon) but the chapters are cut off at the end, they're not all there. I've seen that on a few other stories too, it's not just yours. Also, just a teensy suggestion -- please don't kill me -- you tend to use /waaay/ too many commas, hon. Just a bit of constructive criticism, I'm still going to read every story of yours now (although, not all today!) and look forward to your updates. Ja ne!
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September 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this fic rules!!!!!!
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August 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, I love this story. Updsoonsoon! ^_^
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far! Hee...hee...this chappie is funny...
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August 21, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OOooo loved the yelling! That was so typically him too. *G* Good chapters. I'm glad you're back to updating this story. I was going nuts waiting to see what was going to happen between Kaiba and Jou after that bit of fun Kanashimi started. Can't wait to see what you come up with next!
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August 19, 2004 at 12:00 AM
aaaah! curse yr cliff hangers...Love how u have this set up esp the jou/alter egu interac. ke. keep up the good work and update soon!