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for Warm Summer

by Shiroma

person tk05
schedule April 6, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Lol love it. I wish their was part two. It was seaming hot. Thank you
person Jenn
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved it please write the next one I can't wait, your wonderful <3
person melma
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love that one-shot.. You know that your story gave me a fucking trigger? Everytime I see or hear about a carrot I have to grin.
And, well.. glad I'm a girl *dirty grin*
person Ayeshagirl
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh... I never thought of carrots... cucumbers maybe but carrots... that's original...

heh that was good
person jamma
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so. hot. *melt*
person lemonlemonlemon
schedule March 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was amazingly arousing but omg.....! *laughs hard* (like my-sides-are-splitting hard) You are such a great writer!!!! Never stop writing!
person Inuyasha
schedule February 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I’m not afraid to admit it, I’m his bitch and proud of it!
"Fine then, I'll Be home tomorrow, and bring the carrot."
ARE MY FAVORITE LINES!!!!! AWESOME FIC!!!!!!!!!!!! continue^^
person nicky
schedule January 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww I loved this!
I'm not into solos usually but this one was hot!
The other reviewers are right. You should do some sequel!
person sasuke27
schedule December 22, 2004 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!! someone finally did a joey mastrubation sequence!!! oo and it involved a carrot... my, my, what evil things seto can do with a carrot... *evil yaoiish thoughts*
eeep.. PLEASE CONTINUE!!!
person G.A.G(Good As Gold)
schedule December 16, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!