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for Bed of a Slave

by Shiroma

schedule June 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was Hot! Sequel?
person Myou-hime
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love your story but you made one huge mistake. In your notes you mentioned wives jumping into their husbands cremation fires. That goes against the most basic rule of Egyptian burial. In order for the Ka, or spirit double, to survive, the body must remain intact. Hence, we have mummies. no ashes in Egypt, I'm afraid. That's a Roman tradition.
person Anon
schedule October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
love it first person is a bit confusing when not told but i love it. your good
person midnighteyes
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was a very good start... I do hope you update, and keep up with the story..
person Carinito
schedule February 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:)
must I say more
I loved it, question.
Update?
I really want Yugi to slove the puzzle and etc.
I just love this paring!
You are a really good writer, I mean if I had half your talent I'd be writing all the time.
Hope there will be more.

Carinto

P.S Liked it so much I saved it in my computer
person Yana
schedule December 12, 2004 at 12:00 AM
whoo hoo I love Yami/Yugi stories
person Anon
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
loooved it!
person MultifacetedTune
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yay!!! What a clever idea...I loved it!!! And you wrote it well, too -- great descriptions!!! ^__^ Keep up the good work, and please fee free to write more/add to this story! Ja ne!!!
person Horizont
schedule December 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
That's a great one shot (it is one, right? ^^;; )! I liked reading it a lot, espesially the end. ^_^x

I just wanted to add sth to the fact that slaves went around nude (which I really don't mind... XD):
Wenn some one in egypt wore nothing more than a sheet aound his waist he was aleady considered naked (at least for protection reason they should wear sth). I don't mind your version though! ^_^x

Ciao!
~Horizont
person CiJay
schedule September 25, 2004 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful fic! Wow! You have a talent for writing. *nodnods* You gotta write more!