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for Haunted

by qeenofgames

person raven_bane
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just so you know you missed a few lyerics in the first chapter the last part
person Jin-chan
schedule May 4, 2004 at 12:00 AM
IS THAT IT!!! THERE'S JUST GOTTA BE MORE!!! (p.s. loved it!)
person >>
schedule March 27, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Nice to know you know lyrics, but maybe if you WROTE something. Putting the lyrics doesn't even make it a songfic. Remember words are your friends, what are they doing.

This would be a great story if you added skit towards it. Seriously, that's the only problem.
person silent angel
schedule March 26, 2004 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG how could yami do that??????????? this is a good one keep it up! just plzzzzzzzzzzzz dont kill yugi!