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OMG they need some help!! Seriously Seto is just going to fuck Yami really hard and puncture something. But uh.........I LOVE THIS FIC!! I actually had to play Outlaw while reading it. It was soo naughty and funny. Could you e-mail me when you have updated the fic if it's not too much trouble. HEHE naughty I'm all for it. V^__^V

O_O I can't put it into words. AAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!! I downloaded and listened to all three songs you mention in this fic and... OH MY F!@#IN' GAWD! They all fit! It made this chapter so... awesome. At the one part where Seto says "I hate everything about you" I went and downloaded a song that I heard before its by 3 Days Grace it wasn't a totally on the mark with describing this relationship but damn if itn'tn't close. The song Always by Saliva had me thinking it but, again, not completely right. Ugh I know lots of songs yet I can't think of whits its (at the moment) what about you? Man this story is getting even better then Healing. Shakster, girl (yes girl who cares how old you are? ^_^) if you tell me you know Amber and love her songs I will truly believe you are my soul mate. (In no lesbian sort of way, no not at all *shifts eyes*) Another insanely long and... insane sounding review. But I can't help it! Your stories are that good! And our choices in music are so alike. I so eagerly await the next chapter. *bites her hand in anticipation*

Hmmm.... Here's one sequel that better than the original... The writting? Amazing. I mean, talk about "The plot thickens", eh?
Here the thing, I don't normally read angst because I get depressed VERY easy (Oh my God, the middle of my Hot Pocket is still frozen...WAH!), unfortunatley this means I have to avoid some of my favourite pairings (Aya and Omi, anyone?). Yet, this... THIS... is addictive...Poor, poor bishounen, they have so much pain right now. *Sniffles* I want to belive that Yami and Seto readlly DO love each other... And I really DO want to beltheythey'll get help... And I also really DO want to belive Bakura won't be too hard on poor Seto and Yami... AH! Why all the angst?! The pain, they inflicted on each other in chapter 3 was un-belivable...they're going off the deep end...
You truly are an incredible writer and I seriously mean that (Right up there with some of my favourite writers, Kuwa no Miko, Utopian Trunks, Bright Angel, Talya Firedancer, etc... This and my one for "Lust, Longing, and a Videotape" my my only reviews for anybody on AFF.net, FF.net or SF.com!), but you have fallen down the deadly rabbit hole of Yaoi Angst (Like myself and so many other Yaoi fangirl writers... we have a support group, hon.)
Well, here is where I beg you for MORE (if Yaoi was a drug like cocaine I'd shoot it up into my veins ^_^;) and I also beg for a HAPPY ENDING! Please! I can't stand to see them suffer anymore! Oh, and it would be nice if tend end up being in love... Yeah, and this is most probably asking for too much, but CAN YOU DO A YUGI/RYOU LEMON SCENE?! PLEEEEASSSSSEEEEE?!

Okay. *Gets up off knees* Thank you very much for your time. I'll stop talking now.

Really.

(I wrote a lot...) O_o

-Cami ~The Homicidal Bunny~

Have realised that I called Bakura "MRS Straightforward" before by accident, so am in a humourous mood. Still, am also wonderfully disturbed by this last chapter, and wouldn't have it any other way!!

But it's almost scary, but I love it. I want more! I really want to find out what Bakura does, but feel free to take your time, because that'll only give me more to read. So keep up this beautiful work! You're so talented!

~Blue September~

This is beyond intense. You've painted a complete picture of a toxic relationship. *grins sheepishly* A toxic relationship that is soooo fricken' hot!! Ahem... I liked the talk between Yami and Yugi. *cackles* That was hilarious. A nice bit of lightness with the dark. I hope the exam goes well, but that you get a chance to update before you gotta bury yourself in studying.

WOW I did say that there was such a thing that you can get adicted to sex but It dosent get this bad usually!! and Seto better take care of Yami!! ^_^ and Bakura better shut up and I hope he dosent do something that will make Yami or Seto suffer any more. Grewat story!!

Hope your story has a happy ending!! ^__- Great story by the way!!

Incredibly hot story. Such a destructive relationship worries me though. I hope there is a happy ending to this? Extremely well written. You make me doubt my writing skills.
But great job!

take care--

cve

*showers with plushies and confetti*You did it again!Made me love yer story jus abit too much XP. XD The Name-callings original and classic,and thats what makes readin' this so good!Plus you do it in graphic detail,so it's beautifully writtin. You got me addicted all over again!XD*grins*Please continue,please continue,please continue...*goes into a mad little chant**stops and takes breath*So yeah. Love yer story!XD Ple..co..continue.. and Cya!*runs off to write a yaoi ficcie*

I want to cry. The Bad Touch! I am using that song in my next chapter! We are so on the same wavelength!! (wavelength not skill length) And a preemptive thanks for trying JoxBaku. I wuv u. ^_^ I have to ask, do you know the songs Push it by Garbage or What's your fantasy by Ludicrous? They would so fit in this s. (I. (Ideas not orders girl!) As for the review back in So in love with two, I knew it! I knew you had meant to add those songs in there. (Okay not %100 but about 75) Yeah I just read through the reviews the other day. ^_^ (Insert 1000 words meaning good or some other like it) story!



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