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“No, we’re going to finish that 500 piece aw paw puzzle.” Yugi rolled his eyes, but smiled. “Of course we’re having sex. At least, I hope so.” that was so fucking funny,
i thought it was so cute/funny, in any case this is the best story, i only have threefavorite authors and your one of them, this story is cute, with lots of great sex^^

Me-oh-me-oh-me-oh-my. This is me : Oh they love each other?... Wait, they hate each other...that's a good boy Kaiba be nice to Yami...WHAT?! Yami! Seto was being nice to you, why'd you do that?! ***Anyway, yeah...

This chapter (4) was great (As they always are), but it scared the bejesus out of me...please get them help before they kill each o... ...
Why won't Yami eat? Why didn't Kaiba go "Oh, how long I have waited for that!" when Yami called him 'Baby'... OH! I know why, it's an ANGST (a damn good one at that). And thank you for taking the Yugi/Ryou thing into consideration... I'm so humbled!

Anyways, I look foreward to the next chapter and GOOD LUCK ON YOUR EXAM! Wait, why are you reading this? Shouldn't you be STUDYING?! ~_^ As, always I'm in a pleasant suspense.

- *Cami (New Fangirl of the Great and Powerful Shakster!) The Homicidal Bunny*

Doll--

You've completely melted my brains with this story. I hope you have a happy ending for this! I can't write the way I was previously, not with your images in my head. I'm going to attempt ancient egypt for a while. Your story rocks. You rock. I'll write you later--

take care--
luv

cve

HAHA damn Seto and Yami are me and my ex, I guess that's why we broke up huh? That fucking ass, oh well he was good in bed, that's all that matters right ^_~
You are the shit girl! the shit! You're like so good at this love stuff! But i can see why! I love that little 90201 thingy I'm doing. Anyways keep it up, you rock you rock,
you rock. They give you so much damn room in here, anyways, more kick ass fics alright!

Hey there Shakster!

From the very first paragraph up to the last word of the current chapter I really enjoyed reading it! IT'S GREAT! ^_^x
A friend of mine made me read the first chapter on Friday... and ever since then I tried to read as fast as possible!
I like the way you describe their relationship, that circle of hate, lust, love and hate again - brilliant! Well, I like it when they don't fall in love and just have sex as wild and violent as possible. ^^;;

Neway, I'm so looking forward to the next chapter! Ganbatte ne!

Horizont

God, this is great. lemon, aside the whole idea about Seto n Yami's realationship's GRIPPING

holy shit, that was the best, please write more, u so totally rock! now if u excuse me i have to try to get my lungs working 'cause i stoped breathing some where in the middle of your great writing

Hi

One more thing, don't make them alove each other, please don't! They're just not meant to be in love... I do not think they simply hate each other, it's far beyond that. Feelings usuausually things that can't be put into words. And love and hate are just too strong to describe any feeling properly.
Btw, I have a song for you. It doesn't really match the general idea, but I'm always hearing it when drawing tied up bishounen... it's "Lucky" by ... lemme think ... Bif Naked I guess. The lyrics aren't that great, I like the melody and the atmosphere better.

That's it, I'm deadly tired now. ^.^x
Ja ne!
Horizont

Wow! Great chapter! Sorry I didn't review the others, I'm just azy azy *hides in shame*!
I think 'smut with a purpose' describes this perfectly, this story really has a deep side.
All I can say is I love it and can't wait to read more!
Yugi's Tenshi

Shakster,

This is...getting extremely interesting. LL&V would make you think it's just about kinky sex, but there's definitely more going on here, isn't there?

I am, however, *dying* for a resolution. They need to *talk* about this or they're going to end up hurting each other even more than they have now. Hopefully some of that will be done in the next chapter...which will hopefully be posted soon?