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for Rivals With Benefits

by Shakirah

person Kylie
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I have mixed feelings about this story. Will Yami be alright? It's a wonderful and terrible story at the same time. Please continue though. I have more like than I do hate for this story.
person zero-delta
schedule April 10, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I hate you!!! You’re so fucking evil!! ^___^ is the next chapter going to be the end? Is it going to be a happy ending were Yami and Seto stay together? Please tell me!! You must update this tomorrow!! I am begging you on my hands and knees!! You must you must!! This is one of the grea sto story’s I have ever read in my life!! You are the greatest YamixSeto writer I have ever seen!! No one can compare to you when you write SetoxYami!! No one!! You are truly amazing!! Tell me were I can sign on to your fan club!!
person Kiraya
schedule April 9, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow... this is so fucking awesome... and as frighteningly dysfunctional as you're writing their relationship, I can honestly see Yami and Seto's relationship ending up like this, they both feel so intensely. I really hope they can figure out what the hell's going on between them emotionally...
*shakes head* Just... wow. Amazing... I eagerly await the next chapter.
person Anna EC
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I love your story! You're a very good writer. I can't wait for the next chapter.
But I hope there will be a happy end.
person zro-delta
schedule April 8, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Good luck on your test and I hopoe you update this on saturday please!! ^_____^ I love your storys!
person ACIDFLOWER
schedule April 7, 2004 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHh oh man, I can;t help find this funny, you do them so well, hehe good job!
person Kat
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow.. really good chapter! Damn, they seriously need help. I cracked up at Bakura's 'YES! oh wait, what do I do now?' moment. That teaser for the next chapter is almost frightening, given what has happened so far! I can't wait for that to be posted.

Good luck on the exam and I'm glad the lyrics worked!
person Blue
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Oh dear.

My love of angst is now warring desperately with my love for this couple. I don't know what I want more; for them to end up together or for something really, really aweful to happen. I'm hoping that there's a way I can have my cake and eat it too.

Not sure what to make of the preview, but it got my spidey-sense tingling. Sensing something bad, and am looking forward to it!

Perfect way to end the day!

Thank you!

~Blue September~
person Blue
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Darn, spelled awful wrong.

But what matters is I forgot to wish you good luck on that exam of yours. So, good luck!!

~Blue September~
person Fangirl #1
schedule April 6, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Damn... that got really serious. It's insane! They are like both bipolar, never know what mood they are going to be in next. What are you doing Shakster? Has Acid finally lured you to the darkside?