rate_review Reviews

Maddening. don don't know what to say. It's nuts, but I love descriptive every word. I can even relate to this a little, and you made my eyes water reading this. Good job! No fic has touched me quite like this fic.

Good Lord. You weren't kidding when you said this chapter was more intense than the one before it! Damn! Dark doesn't even begin to cover it. Switching back and forth between Ryou/Yugi & Yami/Seto was fantastic. Really drove home the difference between a good and a bad relationship (still not sure Yami & Seto have one of those...). He's right (Yami in your teaser for the next chapter), no one ever said this was a love story....


Picture was cool! Love it!

I love the story so far it's just with all the talk of death...DON'T LET ANYONE DIE IN THE STORY I BEG YOU!

You're breaking my heart with this story my dear. When an author writes for a certain pairing and love them together as I do, they come alive for said author. Your story is so exposively destructive and intense it has literally stopped me in my tracks. I love it and hate it at the same time. Your writing is absolutely amazing. Please do give them a happy ending. I won't write again until your story is done.

take care--

cve

aww... the next chappy sounds cuuuttteee!... i cant wait!

ok...i am officialy, completely, speechless right now...part of me wants to say "u luv him u hate, make up ur god damn mindz already!" but the other part wants to say "they make a great couple!" (this would be the sick twisted part of me that likez torturing boyz endlessly ^_^) am i making sense? i hope not. i feel like seto and yami right now...i luv u and hate u too! i luv ur story and the plot and everything about it, but i hate how torture me so by ending the chapter that way! and only one more?! *sobz hysterically* *sniff* guess i wasn't that speechless after all... update soon, update soon! (even th i h i dont want this story to end!)

Wow... I can't honestly whetwhether I want to see them together or not. I can say that this is ainlainly an emotional rollercoaster for me! I'm almost exhausted just reading it. On the other hand, I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings! Emotional rollercoaster aside, this is a really good story.

OMFG! i looooved it! as ias intense. intensely erotic. I'ma read it again. the pic *looks at it again* was kawii! almost makes me happy enough to write again. can't wait until the next part.

I don't think Acid is luring you to the darkside anymore, she as already brought you there. ^_^ But hey, this is awesome anyhow. It makes me wonder, the prequel to this story was written so that Seto wouldn't even use a riding crop on Yami, now he is f!@#$%! him to death, literally. Makes me wonder what horrors your next idea will hold. Nope not gonna to say anything thing on the chapter. Not until I expand my vocabulary and come up with some new words... how about vacuous? Wait, that's not the right word. Nevermind, I'll try again next review.

I'm feeling so many different emotions right now!

Joy, because you updated! I feel like I've been waiting forever. I feel so relieved now.

Anger! Because of that last statement. They can still end up together, right? Right?! *tears*

More Joy! Because this last chapter was so troubling. Once again, two sides of my personality are at war.

Oh man, I love this story!! You've made me so happy today. Thank you!