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for Rivals With Benefits

by Shakirah

person Blue
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!! Oh Thank You!!!

I'm tempted to say 'aww,' but it just doesn't seem appropriate. It was so good! The chapters just get better and better!! Oh man this is one of my favourite stories. You are such an awesome writer. I can't imagine the skill it must take to go from a 'plot-less' fic like "Lust, Longing and a Videotape" to a masterpiece like this.

I love it!

~Blue~
person blackwidow10
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
NO!!! Holy shit... you've got me addicted! I haven't reviewed this story before, or the first one (i don't think). I always forget, my memory is terrible. But you've done a great job on both stories, and I can't get enough! Usually it's hard for me to become so obssessed with a story but you've got me hooked! Keep up the good work...damn...and update soon! Pretty please?
person Cami
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
*Dies*

Muraki-sama: Look at that, Shakster, you made her die. There is one thing that resurrect her: a happy ending. I'm counting on you. *Dramatic ER-like Music*
person kylie
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's a very sad story but then it gets better and better. I really hope you continue this. You have my full support.
person BlazeShadowDragon
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Gods this story is so cool I love the angst. Yami and Seto's love life is heartbreaking really but fun to read yep great story.
person Moonlitspire
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
damn! this story is such an addiction! it's evil and depressing and suspenseful and fascinating and psychological and im shocked, traumatized ^^;;, appalled, and yet spellbound and absolutely loving it. (woah, run-on sentence there O_o) it's dredging up so maaw eaw emotions from me, since i don't think i've read something like this before. at some points, i was like O_O and ready to scream from all the things that were happening in the story. needless to say, the scenarios were very realistic in the sense that you didn't tone anything down from any given life situations where things were really spiralling out of control. *is in awe at your writing*; i certainly wouldnt hahe whe willpower to even IMAGINE torturing my favorite characters for such a long time. anyway, cha chapter was definitely a nicer wind-down from all the previous chapters. on the whole, this story is going to leave one hell of an impression. hope to see more soon, and good work!
person Anna
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
It's me again! o.o; well anyway...you got me addicted to this...it's like a soap opera but with a super rated R....they luck useing the words fuck and fucking....don't they....almost every other word is a sware word or "i hate you" Like i said it's addicting....keep updateing it! ^_^
person crimsonvioleteyes
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Ah, my dear--you're making me feel a bit better now. Such an intense, co-dependent, psychotic, lhatehate portrayal of my favorite characters. Bravo. This story is absolutely incredible. The way you portray them, bound to each other, unable to let go, is how I feel about them as well. Not as destructive as you describe them though. You promised a somewhat happy ending, so I'm holding you to that.

take care--

cve
person Anna EC
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
I really don't know what to say... The contrast between Seto/Yami and Yugi/Ryou was great! Please update, I want to know what happens next.
person Cinder
schedule April 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Holy fuckmonkeys, that's good.
*Giddy squeal*
More soon would be spectacular.
*Insane giggling*
And now I'm late because I couldn't stop reading that.
But it was worth it! I'm gonna be giddy for the rest of the day. Yay!
- Cinder