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it was great, i think that was a kick as story!

Wow! Bitchin' ending! I had no clue how you'd wrap this up, but I love it! Made the whole roller coaster ride worth it. Seriously, I really loved this story. Thanks for fhinghing it and giving it this ending!

Why do you write about minors? How do you justify overly perverse scenarios and dialogue? Why is this a good idea in your mind, and is this the best way to use your apparent abundance of free time?

Does anyone reading this story thing its strange to write about underage gay sex? Is this a hothatthat everyone can be openly proud of?

I must say that this days it's so hard to find something good to read in the net, especially if the anime (or book etc.) is popular at the moment.... and there is really a lot of crap out there. I'm so happy I found this fic's. It's one of the b's I's I have read till now. The characters are so well written and it's good to see Yami no Yuugi and Seta Kaiba "in charater" !!!!! I normally don't loke it when Yami is written as the brokable guy or as a weakling (that he is not). It is often forgotten that he is the "YAMI" of the two of them. I love how you have written it in your story... I especially liked the part were Yami controlled Seto out of the passive. That was really great!^^ I hope will post the last chap soon. Can't wait to read it.

Hi there!

I do have a severe problem finding words that can say what I think about this story. I like it, I really do. It makes me stay up until late in the night (it's almos 2 o'clock right now) to read it all. I can't stop thinking about it, ever since I read the first part I wondered how Seto's and Yami's realtionship would end and I just can't figure out how this could have a happy ending. The logical outcome would be Yami and/or Seto being dead.
But other than that I love the way you can write lemons! Hell, they are violent (excluding that Yugi/Ryou of course! ^^;;), they are... I don't know, they have everything. They have that thing I can't name that makes them so...undescribable. Wow, that doesn't say anything. -.-x I don't want to male this a "I LOVE YOUR STORY PLEASE CONTINUE", that simply wouldn't do. This is a masterpiece.
You make their difficult emotions so clear, it's like I was there, hearing them talk and everything, it feels like I can hear every single feeling they put inside their words. Exspecially when Yami said "I'm in love with you, Seto Kaiba.". Brilliant. I was reading Yami's part of the dialogue aloud; it's great.
Well, I'm looking forward to the final part. I can't wait to read that happy ending... though I really cannot imagine what it could look like. But no matter what, this will always remain one of the best stories I've read. I do think that someone needs a certain talent to write like you do. I'd be happy to read more of your stories.

By, you're doing a great job!
Horizont

PS: I know this got a bit... emotional? ^^x Sorry for writing such a long text that doesn't really say much.

Sorry, sorry, sorry, sorry!!!! For not reviewing earlier!!!
Now, that was one hell of a depressing chapter! I am pathetic and things get to me easily, but people who aren't touched by this have a heart of stone! You really make people feel the charecter'spaispair, how they are torn between their emotions. And I have to say, this is your greatest story so far, at least in my opinion!
So, please update fast! I can't wait for the last chapter!
Yugi's Tenshi

I like how you are able to describe all those confusing emotions of Yami and Seto. Please update soon.

... ... ... ... ... ... ... Oh my Godfathers. *Sobbing* Why? Why all the HATE?! *Cue that "Where is the Love" song*

I thank for for the lemon but I must admit I am guilty of speed reading the Yugi/Ryou parts, I mean at first I read every word but then all those bad things with Yami/Seto... I'll probably have to go back and re-read that part.

Here's what I say 1. I'm glad Yugi/Ryou are in love (at least somebody is) 2. Will Yami ever be able to have anal sex again *snicker, I mean, Sobs* 3. Oh God, I'm becoming sadistic 4. What about Bakura? 5. Is the end (of the story) near? 6. Why no "I've always loved you" (And IIIIIIII e IIIIIII will always love yoooooou!) 7. Oh, I know why, because you like to see the poor innocent bishounen hurt 8. My reviews are too long 9. Why am I reading this at 11:30am Easter Sunday *Cue the "It's 11:30am do YOU know where your life is?" commercial* 10. Just to make it an even ten, I will say this, No matter what you decide to do with the Yami/Seto relationship I have faith that it will be a good decision/ending and not too cruel (?).

-Cami The "I should be doing that report that's due to-morrow" Bunny

P.S.- I'm beliving you about the not-sappy happy ending, don't get all evil and change it on me... Or else I'lve tve to get my Muraki-sama plushie on you *Muraki-sama plushie lifts bangs and glares with the big creepy eye.* Heh... ^_^;

Fucking Damn, that was some crazy shit going on there. Yami, holy shit what will Seto do? and AWW you made this out to me. That was dark but holy, very good.
I can't wait to see how you end this crazy fic. I think it's your best work so far.

*Claps*Claps*Claps*Claps*!!! great I want to read more!!! and you gotta new fan right here pall!!! ^__________^ I must see what happens next!! your alredy finished right? so can you please put the last chappy like next week!! please!!! ^___^ oh and happy easter!!